jroday
on Blobby song$ by MR Blobby
11 Aug 2004, 6:45 AM
SELF-RESPECT-WHERE TALENT IS A DWARF,
SELF-ESTEEM IS A GIANT
HANG IN THERE MR BLOBBY!
I'm a blackman that bullshit comment you wrote dont mean a damn thing for what i ask you. I did'nt mean a
thing for asking what is the concept of your lyric? and
you want to stereotype me. you need to stop taking some
of your work so personally. I like the damn lyric. born,raised. great great grandfather hung in mississippi during those times. and people dont like to talk about it.you say a blackman is singing it.his
ass wont be from mississippi.but anyway S.D.you just jump all over me like i wanted to hang you like some nigger on a mississippi tree.get your shit together you help me alot when i join poemranker on my writing. those three zero's you got did'nt come from me.i live in florida. they might have come from mississippi.i bless you with a 9
Glad you enjoyed it.
Clever.
And what about voting three zeros on my lyric anonymously WITHOUT EVEN FUCKING UNDERSTANDING ITS INTENDED MESSAGE????
You see the words nigger, Mississippi, hang, and tree and you automatically flip on that idiotic PC switch (Politically Correct, in case you are not aware of current catch phrases..dimwit) and then quickly act without thinking, hiding behind the guise that somehow you are fighting back the tide of racism in society...
Did it ever occur to you that it was to be assumed, and was by most, that the lyric is sung by a black man? Do you not fucking notice any of the pride in the song, not white pride mind you, but a completely different sort of pride voiced within those lines? No, you didn't, you took no time to use the brain you were fucking born with to notice the somewhat obvious.
Congratulations, you've succeeded in proving to us rankerfolk that your are a complete and total DULLARD-NIMROD.
G'day.
Took me awhile to see the picture. Lol
Good poem...I loved the ending. -10-
Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Prince of Void
replying on One dot.And the rest is our lives by Prince of Void
10 Aug 2004, 11:57 PM
i consider the concept as the heart of this poem
the concept is more important to me here
Prince of Void
replying on One dot.And the rest is our lives by Prince of Void
10 Aug 2004, 11:46 PM
Thank u for ur comment i think u are right ..
but i believe more in subconscious
i love the title of ur poem ...i love the poem ...really a nice poem
very beautiful poem
its about you
who did you think?
I grow with these people, as I do with you. DON'T NEGLECT ME!I can always use your help. Please.
Listen....... Do you hear it? Never count your days. just learn to enjoy them. thanks for you vote on my poem old friends. read some more and tell me what you think. my e-mail is posted. thanks again.
I can only be happy that I decided to come back here tonight. I live in southeast Colorado, And I've seen three tornadoes from my front porc tonight, not to mention the two trees that I saw on fire tonight. I had to wait at one and call the fdp[ because it was just a flamin! Thanks .
Great description, only thing I'm not sure about is the line breaks.
Nice, I've been playing around with a poem that has a similar theme to this. =-)
This is very well-written. I'm always drawn to these poems which seem to expand the reflection of a single moment and tell a story of feelings instead of events.
I especially like this because it really made no sense to me until I read into the things that seemed out of place.
I feel that the introduction of the characters is a little too strong since the conclusion doesn't really wrap up their stories.
Well unknown^user, i did... haha... so disgusted at myself.. tee hee.. but then again.. i wanted ppl to read it, so added a little score to make it more appealing... haha... well.. i failed.. i was hoping for more comments as i put in a lot of effort to this piece...