sanity
on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer
14 Jul 2004, 2:12 PM
Liked this one................
Very enjoyable
Normally I would say "I love it, you're very talented" but since everything that's happened lately, I just want to say I'm sorry, but you're still very talented, and I love you
Pleasant enough sounds.
Dear Dark Angel:
Oh.... I really do not feel that the conversation in which we have been engaging is, as you say, "appalling stupid." As it is rather clear to me that you are a pretty smart fellow and also a rather good writer (as I have really enjoyed some of your finer poems.
Personally, I feel that some of the things you have broought to my attention have been rather relevant... and even perhaps a bit enlightening.
The best to you.
Your Friend,
Doug
What you should be apologising for is this appallingly stupid conversation, not your utter failure of a life. But thanks anyway!
that was good..but you know...the last line shows the whole meaning so i love the last line
yes, 'flob alob flob weeeed' is my favourite bit of bill and ben gibberish too.
Old Rearends By Captain Napkin
A wedding mannana
Somewhere in Rowanda
The groom has AIDS
As Uranus fades
Away, yadda yadda
yadda.
Indeed.
fat arse
Yes
A Fartstenching Staggering Work Of Weenus
In retrospect, it could've been more clever. I quite like the 'artificial sweetner' suggestion for contemp lit, tho I think decaf would be better than real coffee.
Dear Dark Angel:
Yes you are right....... As my return is no doubt "quite greasy!"
And not only do people believe that I must lack integrity returning to Poemranker as I have, but, even more importantly, there is little doubt in my own mind that I have illustrated the fact that "I have no integrity at all" due to the sleasy way I have chosen to return to Poemranker.
Thank you again for your help.
Your Friend,
Doug Soderstrom
Dear Dark Angel:
Let's face it.....I guess that I am a fraud, and perhaps even just a "small piece of shit" trying to enable myself to feel better at the unfortunate expense of bring shame to so many others (the college in which I work, Poemranker, as well as others who write such fine poetry on The Poemranker Site. I am sorry, and I'll try to do better in the future.
Thanks for your help, and I sincerely hope that you will choose to forgive me. Thank you very much.
Your Friend,
Doug Soderstrom, Ph.D.
I think I would like this better if I had read it before the Zin/ poem. Maybe you set the bar too high and now I want it all to be that good. Still, not bad and better than most of what I've read today.
I was turned off by the length of this from someone I hav'nt read before, but now I'm glad I read it anyway. Some of them are better than other (particularly, I think, Zin, Enough and Squeeze) but overall, very good. I'm impressed.
Does that mean you're comfortable with the fact that you've made a somewhat greasy return to poemeranker? Will people think you lack integrity for posting something after saying you would never post again? Do you get round that because you're a strong, independent person who doesn't let the opinions of others stand in his way?
Verses 1 and 2 good. Verse 3 weak. Verse 4 doesn't make sense.