cuddlytiger17
on The Secrets Of Men by scitz
26 May 2004, 3:56 PM
lol i really like this one!
Scone
lol
As a young man, I thought there's not much I can hope for with this horribly deformed two inch penis, it wasn't until I discovered that my outrageously teeny pud could knock a retard up at fifty yards that I fully began to understood that the lord does indeed work in mysterious ways. Now, three trailers, three fires and five domesticate disturbance charges later we have decided, hey let's have three more! That way we have enough to go camping for real, and watch them do all the work!
Sometimes I really think Hitler did achieve something? He forced even more morons to move around the planet in bigger herds to soil their wild oats fearlessly in the hopes of replacing all of those deaths, and hey, nucleur or not, families are the future, just look at all of those young leaping arab boys with c4, they have moms and dad's and twenty brothers because 19 will die along with the jews, somebodys got to do it, I mean my two kids are too chicken, they only know how to watch barney, fart, pee, eat, sleep, and do it all over again, and yours is still so small. Lets fool them as long as we can, okay, and hide the real world from them, that way we can stay on this island of safety and keep breeding FOREVER.
I think it's a guy, with a huge buckled beaver bag?
Bingo.
Dewd
You should see my new cock-ring. It plays three melodies and flashes.
Nuding.
This should be a penis monologue.
Wouldn't this make MORE sense if you were saying this to your lap?m I think so, yes, I do.
Because her eyes fold in so many different ways, I've come to discover, unfortunately.
I did for a 'while' too, but then I changed my mind, twice now.
wow, i really needed that - this was from my soul ~ sometimes compliments give breath where there is life.
my skin is hereby tougher~
damn... but you said "bottom" so i'll give you a 1
-end transmission-
this is just the sort of cheaky poem i like 10
francis... what blinding and deafening love hath inspired this?
pretty. What's with the spaces before commas sometimes?
the folded way your eyes caved.... nice
This is a damn good translation. One of the best I've ever seen, and I've seen tons. Now whether or not you should call it "both of ours" is beyond my rights to decide. My guts tell me your trampling on the genius of another, but on the other hand you've done an excellent, and I do mean excellent, job of maintaining the tone of the original, and still you have created verse that stands on it's own "English" merits. So i can see why you feel some sense of ownership. It's a tough call. I give you a ten because it works beautifully as a translation, and you did mark it as "Other" when catagorizing it. Perhaps Mr. Kaolinfire can add it as a catagory.