-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on The Winturd Tale of Sir Donald Nudesby by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
23 May 2004, 12:10 PM
I would have done, but you never gave me an answer or an email address.
A donut lying next to a maple bar on a plate next to linen-wrapped silverware after a weight watcher meeting when you find out you've gained__ lbs.
Stephen Robins
replying on Tony Blair's sagging purple johnny by Stephen Robins
23 May 2004, 11:04 AM
Oh Lord forgive me, what have I done uniting the two greatest wits in the whole of the known world. Shun Shin + nowhereman combined in a ferocious assault of contumely. The affrontary in expressions such as: "lack wit and intellect", "anemic dick" "mucuos like brain" is beguiling in its content and wounding in its venom.
Heaven help me, and indeed anyone else they insult with such well thought out revilements as "prat", "twit" or "nuisance".
You going to send be that Mp3?
You know, The Werewolves and I do
a really bitchin' version of the
Crutchling electrified now 'tis very cool.
The Mp3's not going to blow off my face
is it?
As in Paul Bowles?
New form proposal: The Poemranker.
Halfway through it decides to rhyme, forgets, then decides to again.
Some of these clauses, especially in the third stanza, seem poorly grouped. The last is weird, too. "they" is really poorly defined, and the string of grotesquely conjoined similes and subordinate clauses that make up the rest of that sentence don't help.
When you're "screaming in silence" is your mouth actually producing some kind of, I don't know, anti-sound that is inaudible to everyone, or are you just screaming out loud somewhere really far away from other people?
If your answer is the first one, how do you know the sound you're not producing is a scream? What if it's more like, say, a moan - or a pleasant sustained middle A sharp?
Or what if you're just holding your mouth really wide and slowly exhaling while people passing on the street wonder what the heck you're doing?
1) Yes. But not because of me.
2) Who is the narrator of Frankenstein and what is his mission? Don't cheat. God will know.
3) I didn't think any of those things.
4) This one doesn't make any sense at all. And don't tell me what true criticism is.
5) Poemranker is often the subject of my own poetry. To wit,
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
...silver yeas? (years?)
graceful, nostalgic
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Reflections of the Living Dead by SomeKindofPoet
23 May 2004, 7:33 AM
I don't think you know how to construct prepositional phrases for "accuse". Great try though! -10-
lol, now that made me laugh, and I agree.
I dare accuse you by your comments.
1)Again...a worthless place for a good, useful opinion on poetry.
2)You are your own left buttock.
3)You must be, by your logic, a perfect retard.
4)Pretentious- instead of giving true critizism you insult, per definition "of a display that is tawdry or vulgar." This shows that my definition was correct in the first place...your proposed was off by quite a long-shot.
5)Decapolis has nothing to do with the subject of my poetry...just like poem-ranker probably has little to do with the subject of your own.
6)If you wish to put your obvious education to proper use, then be a good critic that gives useful information to a poet rather than a stream of insults. Insults help neither you nor the poet. You turn yourself into prick in their eyes while putting your education to waste and leaving the page blank of anything meaningless whatsoever.
7)You're Welcome.
This is amazing... you must really know what its like to be in love when noone understands you... you put it so perfectly... dont listen to what anyone else tells you, you have a gift and you should never stop writing... 10...
I agree... this made me feel so sad... you are so good at just painting pictures with words... i feel like you have touched my soul... even though i dont know who u are... simply beautiful... 10...
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Reflections of the Living Dead by SomeKindofPoet
23 May 2004, 4:54 AM
Look SomeKindofPoet, I don't know who you think you are, but I have an IQ of 98 (for which I have an official certificate) so I'm definitely not thick. Anything between 90 and 110 is well within the normal range, so how dare you accuse me of being narrow and poorly assumptive?
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Reflections of the Living Dead by SomeKindofPoet
23 May 2004, 4:46 AM
Except it is, and it does. Because that is what it's about.
P.S. I like the way you start your sentences with "Again, ". Your mouth is a bountiful harvest for plum-lovers worldwide.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Reflections of the Living Dead by SomeKindofPoet
23 May 2004, 4:41 AM
bow'ls
I never new you were so good at this... and all this time I thought you were a poser like me... 10 for everything...