thepinkbunnyofdoom
on Jade Milieu by Enkidu
21 May 2004, 11:55 PM
Matter Piece. Absolute Matter!!! -9-
beautifully expression.
Saddism, bad. Pimple/Lyrics(Hint: what this really is) need work. Way too much focus on ryhme. emotion, worked it up but not in any interestingly new style. -4-
Allow your eye to do the only bleeding you cause yourself. Tears work so much better...
Trust me I know...
I almost married a "cutter"
-8-
hmmm...
seems a little lacking of... Something... Like substance, not so much depth more... purpose or drive, but I'm looking for a better word...
Damn it.
Someone able to help me figure what this lacks?
No vote for now.
You never cease to amaze.
There is so much more that could have been displayed here. It seems you focus your words like a bullet, but you limit the meaning by using a weak hand gun.
he gained an enemy,
Lost a love, and destroyed himself
All in the same day
Oh yeah, I do understand. Those lines are beautiful. I have. March 7th 2004. -9-
This is waaay too much like the lines from the movie Ten Things I Hate About You!!!!
This is great! hehe. Definately my kind of poem! ~10~
I really liked this...It's good!
good poem, i wish them well as well
well, good job.
Yes, i wrote it last night. Thank you! :)
This is MUCH better. Is this a new one that you wrote?
it's a 10
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Tony Blair's sagging purple johnny by Stephen Robins
21 May 2004, 5:18 PM
You have clearly never sampled the dubious delights of poppers. You don't sound like anything except a giggling idiot for thirty seconds, and then you say "Aoooouhhhh. Ha ha ha. Ohh."
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Tony Blair's sagging purple johnny by Stephen Robins
21 May 2004, 5:16 PM
I can't decide who's more wrong. You're all wrong.
Well, you are partly right. I am poor, young and I do HAVE a scrotum which houses a pair of very large balls.
So, let me make this clear to you:
YOU are a bargain basement -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I. You think you are being clever with your comments but you lack the wit and intellect to make them anything but annoying.
It makes no difference, though, because your inability to understand the question better proves my point than anything that I could say.
You don't understand the comment because you are lack the ability to grasp anything beyond the length of your anemic dick, its half-scabbed pee-hole the only thing you have for a mouth, and its empty ball-sack the only thing you have to contain your thin mucous like brain.
Perhaps by your standards - but that doesn't mean much does it? I would just have to have used some cockney lilt and maybe the word cunt and it would be closer to your, again meaningless, ideal.