SweetJuliet10
on us by tatteredatlas
13 May 2004, 11:35 PM
you are
like stars
and whales
fairy tales,
i like that part just cus its cute....... kinda reminds me of the rhyme what are like girls made of
lil girls are made of
sugar
and spice
and everything nice.
i think your poem is fairly good 7
just take some tylenol
and this is on the top 20? .... sheesh
what the hello does it matter where the fictional character ac slaters name came from lol arent we suppose to be judging the poem here. ~10~
you can go die
oh yea one more thing.... the poem is suppose to be about 2 girls you love ... rite? well then there is "angie" and there is "Terryn" but at the end you say your happy the other girl you love is still your friend...... what the fuck...im lost i thought there was only 2 girls. oh wait did you already have a blow up doll? damn then i guess me telling you to go get one was a waste of my breathe.
so what u got dumped get the fuck over it..... ya know i would tell you to get a blow up doll but she would proly leave your titty baby whinning ass too! ~0~
hey i give you props girly.... i love it man oh man i love it....... cus i been there and you know what jim, jack, and jose are always around ... fuck guys get some liquor!
ps i really did like the line " the one person worth your tears will never make you cry" ~~~~~ 10~~~~~~
peace out
you know what.... first off dark angel dont preach to us man.... i mean gosh you write shit about aids on a van.... and then you want to sit here a quote scriptures.... second off the idoits that argue with you about god condeming you to hell need to get a life... every one sins and half of them dont care.... why the hell do we dissguse it on a poem post... open a chat room for crying out loud oh and im giving u a
-5- cus personally i like the nude... its free and beautiful (unless your jelly rolls hang over your pecker... then its just gross... lol ewwwwww)
hey davey one question.... were you talking about michel jackson? and i quote from the poem:"Thou enjoyest the company of children in the bedroom,"
oh well..... its not the infamous EGG that you also wrote but ill give you a 7 just cus
okay i think that the poet is pissed or hurt.... im not real sure cus the poem dont make a whole lotta sence. oh well i give ya a 5 just cus u confussed the hello outta me.
and i quote from the poem " <BR> what i cannot say" ...
no shit!!!! i still dont know what the hell she said.
.... i read this ummmm ?poem? like 3 times and i still have no freakin clue what the poet is writing about.... lashes and feet?? i dunno thats all i could get out of it.
can someone explain exactly what the heck this ?poem? is about pleaseeeeee....
well normally i would say that this is just a waste of freakin space but.... however i think it is funny in a stupid kind of way! see yall have to try and pretend you are or are as close as a normal persons mind can get to ole daveys here to understand this POEM if thats what you want to call it. my conclusion: there is no fuckin meaning you idiots that keep saying the poem is awful and the poet is a fuckwit.... hes delibertly being a "fuckwit" to get either a) a rise out of people or b) a laugh out of people..... I chose to laugh my ass off but not at the poem, at the jerks who take this poem seriously and critisize it... HELLO YOU MORONS, THERES NOTHING TO CRITISIZE! AND DAVEY IM GIVING YOU A 10 JUST CUS IM IN A GOOD FUCKIN MOOD TODAY LMAO!
okay first of all why ask why so damn much... we cant define every aspect of life... second off if your not "one of these peolpe" why write about it... and last but not least, dont sit there on your pedestal and judge people because they are depressed... its not your place to say that they will never see the light, so if you arent like "those people" then write about something you actually know about .... thanks!!!
okay why do people waste their time writing this shit.... more importantly why the hell am i or anyone eles wasting their time reading this shit.... ya know if it was even alil funny that would at least make it kinda some what worth alil bit of the time we are wasting reading it.... but ummmm ITS NOT FUNNY ***rolls my eyes*** ......... oh just shoot me now!
Completely regardless of the validity of my poem, which really probably sucks anyway (though the one rating would indicate otherwise), this is the most entertained I've been in a while. Carry on.
A) I like it
B) to remember that I have it.
Perhaps I am not remembering my high school physics correctly.
IIRC, gravity is inverse square -- as two things get closer, they will attract each other more, and get closer, and so on. If I am wrong, then this whole nice little metaphor of mine is moot! >.<;
where in colorado?