cuddlytiger17
replying on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17
11 May 2004, 2:10 PM
I write about what i feel, and in my "teen" years, this IS what i feel. I'm not going to write about something that I don't have any passion for in order to achieve others approval. Love is what is most important to me, and in my eyes, poetry is one's emotions. I don't use poetry to try to impress someone, I use it to express what I feel. If you don't like what I write, then don't read it. If other people feel the same as you, then so be it. But this is how I feel, and that's what matters to me.
Excellent.
Hmmmm, I don't much care for spiders....kind of freaks me out...
It was all going swimmingly until the end of the first verse, then it became a bit incoherent.
N.B. 'The pool has' not the pool's possessive.
Of course, that incident was later determined to be the worst case of Lewd-entrapment ever, as the broken outhouse door-lock which played such a crucial role in the arrest was exposed as the work of a special L.A.P.D. crack unit.
hmm. first things first---dare i say it? i demand the you!
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on After the ice season ~ shamelessly lewd revision by zodiac
11 May 2004, 7:36 AM
I first encounter'd the word in 1998, when it was reported that George Michael had performed a lewd in a public outhouse. He was busted by the L.A.P.D during OPERATION LEWD RESOLVE.
Sex is a butterfly but a butterfly does not buzz
and a buzz does not flow
nor does it flood.
Sorry, I didn't know the definition of a Lewd until just a minute ago.
I have no clue what this means other than the closing line. Still, I like it's originality. Particularly the beat.
Quite like it, although it does seem to hanker after a garden that is in a pond!
I don't know who you think this is, but it's not him.
i don't know, what kind of virgin runs with a point?
this tasted like the desert/dessert. yum.
i am taken in by your imagery and your self-assured-ness. (real word? don't know)
Here's an interesting question: Who in the fuck is dave? #1 For fuck's sake why should the layman care? # the 2...
What, no death? Boo.
sorry Silver-I accidentally erased your comment-( meant to reply questioning it-you can put it back up if you would like!
Oh yes, I'm sure you'll go far. Don't drop the glasses.
Good words,Give it a few years, you might find a good man and a real talent for writing.