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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on The Negro by Everyone 24 Apr 2004, 12:50 AM
Obviously you have never seen Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom. Your opinions on all matters are therefore void.
sarah on The Brigadier's Motto by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 23 Apr 2004, 11:01 PM
very interesting... i like it
wilco replying on Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco 23 Apr 2004, 9:53 PM
Of course. They are a constant source of inspiration to me. I must graciously extend my most humble apologies if I have offended you with my question. I suppose that I didn't understand that you were referring to yourself. :o)
wilco replying on Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco 23 Apr 2004, 9:50 PM
You see, there would be no limit to how tall you could be if all that you wanted to do was jump. To leap (a feat that I associate with small "low-to-the-ground" beings such as frogs, midgets, leprechauns, etc.) you would need to be, as mentioned, low to the ground. If you grew to extreme heights, I imagine that it would be impossible to leap....that you would simply jump.
xunitedx replying on jammin in the basement by xunitedx 23 Apr 2004, 9:32 PM
plus, i think stuff that doesnt rhyme is maddening. it's called different opinions. i've never written anyting that doesn't rhyme.
xunitedx replying on jammin in the basement by xunitedx 23 Apr 2004, 9:30 PM
i was drunk, and need some lyrics to sing so i could join in on the jammin going on in my friends basement.
some deleted user replying on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster> 23 Apr 2004, 8:52 PM
I wank, does that count?
Shuushin replying on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster> 23 Apr 2004, 8:45 PM
is you wankster too?
some deleted user replying on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster> 23 Apr 2004, 8:42 PM
That was either my genius or my mistake.
Shuushin replying on The Negro by Everyone 23 Apr 2004, 8:40 PM
its more of a "bending over" to the right.
Shuushin replying on The Negro by Everyone 23 Apr 2004, 8:39 PM
curried monkey brains would be better.
Shuushin replying on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster> 23 Apr 2004, 8:36 PM
Same one Nentwined was talking about: "you've mastered the haiku poem" 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 unless someone wants to convince me "poem" is one syllable.
Shuushin on jammin in the basement by xunitedx 23 Apr 2004, 8:31 PM
AABBCC... rhyming is maddening - it really is.
Shuushin on Deceiving by Ice 23 Apr 2004, 8:29 PM
I do like the idea of adding some sound effects, etc. - but not enough of it here to realize that idea. This is just so classic a pimple - the one word I come to is "endearing". But this subject has been so done. and done.
Shuushin on Chronic Depression by Ice 23 Apr 2004, 8:24 PM
A good exercise - writing this stuff will help you to write the things people want to read.
Shuushin on Radiation Reflections by sarah 23 Apr 2004, 8:22 PM
I think your search for alliteration and rhyme put a slight, likely unintentional, comedic twist to the thing. It is difficult to take such a thing seriously when it rhymes too conveniently. The only examples I can think of involve war.
Shuushin on Humidity by Lifeboatman 23 Apr 2004, 8:18 PM
is there a missing word in the next to last line?
Shuushin on Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco 23 Apr 2004, 8:16 PM
I can't imagine anyone too tall to leap. How does that work?
some deleted user replying on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster> 23 Apr 2004, 8:07 PM
What 8 syllable line?
sarah replying on Radiation Reflections by sarah 23 Apr 2004, 7:33 PM
thank you... with appreciation, sarah