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Shuushin on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster> 23 Apr 2004, 7:09 PM
I'm giving you a seven in the hopes that the 8 syllable line was intentional. Cuz, well - that would be funny.
Shuushin on When feeling has been lost... by philn 23 Apr 2004, 7:02 PM
second stanza has some fresher language in it, but somehow its like spending a day with grandma and getting a half dollar on the way out.
Shuushin on factor me out by fluffigrbl11 23 Apr 2004, 6:58 PM
eenteresting... You got a ten already? Count me in.
nentwined on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster> 23 Apr 2004, 3:08 PM
"you've mastered the haiku poem" -- 8. I can't tell if that's satire or a mistake. 6.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 23 Apr 2004, 2:52 PM
:-(
some deleted user on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster> 23 Apr 2004, 2:48 PM
How to say nothing While mastering haiku form Is why we're all here 8 for satire
tadpole replying on 8 or 9 by tadpole 23 Apr 2004, 2:25 PM
Hey thanks, yeah I just read it again and the rocks twice in a row is kinda too much and one less coin wouldn't hurt for sure either.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Radiation Reflections by sarah 23 Apr 2004, 1:55 PM
Don't feel too despondent; radiation is a tricky subject to write about because so many people find it funny. I know this is an emotional piece for you, and I respect that, but you might consider using abortion as a metaphor for chemotherapy in future. Good poeme, though -7-
some deleted user replying on Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco 23 Apr 2004, 1:26 PM
Absolutely! Do you not remember my passionate poems?
sarah replying on Radiation Reflections by sarah 23 Apr 2004, 1:17 PM
thanks... i am just so surprised. i've posted this elsewhere and it's never been brought to my attention that it seemed humorous. i have much to learn here... all comments are appreciated. thank you so much. :) sarah
sarah replying on Radiation Reflections by sarah 23 Apr 2004, 1:14 PM
duffy... why?
nentwined replying on Radiation Reflections by sarah 23 Apr 2004, 1:13 PM
The tone of the poem is very humerous, as if it were tongue-in-cheek. The flow of the first stanza, the fact that you rhyme "as they pleases", ... Perhaps the poem simply doesn't convey what you were trying to put into it.
wilco replying on Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco 23 Apr 2004, 12:46 PM
and do you think that the California despondent found any hope in the hills of Tennessee?
wilco replying on Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco 23 Apr 2004, 12:44 PM
A short story about a drunken leprechaun smoking a joint a Wrigley Field with Johnny Cash....it just might work.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 23 Apr 2004, 12:35 PM
GOOGLE SEARCH RESULTS "The truth of a proposition is inversely proportional to the number of idiots who believe it" = nil TOTAL: nil Once again you fail.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 23 Apr 2004, 12:27 PM
The truth of a proposition is inversely proportional to the number of idiots who believe it.
penguin fiend on Poem with a twist by LosT SykoPath 23 Apr 2004, 11:42 AM
Whatever fucks your goat
some deleted user on The Brigadier's Motto by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 23 Apr 2004, 11:26 AM
Is there really anybody left like this Brigadier?
some deleted user on Chronic Depression by Ice 23 Apr 2004, 11:18 AM
Get over it! If this sorrowful wail helps, fine.
some deleted user on Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco 23 Apr 2004, 11:08 AM
No, they're mostly the dreams of a California despondent, following a man to the hills of Tennessee without a clue.