-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on do androids dream? by nentwined
22 Apr 2004, 7:53 AM
But at the same time, they fervently thank Robo-Theresa that they were not born a Negro.
Is this poem based on your own personal experience?
"You want to smear excrement all
over
me and my mom, but
there is none to be found
at this hour."
But seriously ... I don't understand the idea of "smearing sunshine".
-10-
nice, but I do have a couple problems. Some of the rhymes sound forced and the ending is nothing special.
however, that jolting sensation? Where you smoothly rhyme two long lines, then go abruptly short? Don't change that.
IT IS HEREBY DECREED THAT:
1. The phrase "five-star classy guy" is ferociously redolent of Milton Keynes circa 1988;
2. The phrase "pet peeve" is frighteningly reminiscent of Grimsby circa 1992;
3. The phrase "my self-esteem fluctuates" is disturbingly evocative of Hull circa 1998.
the beginning is what the rest of this should be like.
Yes, but HolySpirit is the temple of Jesus. Or the costume, rather.
POWERS ATTRIBUTED TO HOLYSPIRIT JESUS BUT NOT TO REGULAR JESUS:
1) Stealthe Impregnation (Lk 1:35, Mt 1:15)
2) Animorphism (Mt 3:16, Mk 1:10)
3) Wilderness Guide (Mt 4:1, Mk 1:12)
4) Ventriloquism (Mt 10:20)
5) Wind-manipulation and Pyrokinesis, Tongue-speaking (Acts 2)
6) +5 Boldness (Act 4:31)
7) Hallucination
nice. are there going to be more lessons or is this a one time thing?
I just posted a sister poem on this topic.
Complete genius. However, I would recommend changing "He's soiled" to "He soils". -9-
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
replying on horus8 accepts black cock for cash by King Abdullah II
22 Apr 2004, 7:18 AM
CHRISTIANS & HOLY SPIRIT
Are temples of (1Co 3:16; 6:19). Are filled with (Ac 2:4, 33; 4:8, 31; 6:5; 8:17; 11:24; 13:9, 52; Eph 5:18; 2Ti 1:14). Have fellowship with (Ro 8:9, 11; 1Co 3:16; 6:19; 2Co 13:14; Php 2:1). Receive deposit of (2Co 1:22; 5:5; Eph 1:13-14). Are sealed with (2Co 1:22; Eph 1:13; 4:30). Have righteousness, peace, and joy in (Ro 14:17; 15:13; 1Th 1:6). Are unified by (1Co 12:13). Testify that Jesus is Lord by (Jn 15:26; 16:14; 1Co 12:3).
Tasty. Tasty like delicous little fishes.
yes Rachel, they dream of electric sheep.
A nicely encapsulated thought - and it rhymes; it must be true.
Hey, thanks for listening.
Is didacticism still bad? What is poetry that is not didactic, impartial? Is poetry not creeping didacticism?
I'll give you an -8-, I would give you more if this was decentthoughtranker.com
thanks,
The question: whether Jesus, a 14th level cleric with (at the very least) an Amulet of +20 Pain Endurance, really died or just pretended to die.
The answer: No. It was pretend. Or, at any rate, it was given that he could Auto-Revivify within 31 hours, so the entire act was more like, say, holding one's breath for an incredibly long time than dying.
Some of the punctuation is a little awry. For what it's worth:
His mind withdraws, like the tongue,
too far back to swallow
the water of a lake, green as moss.
'What colour would you prefer,
you must drink' says the tutor.
'make it the pale blue I know as water.'
'but pale blue is the sky;
green is the eye of the sycamore
that looks down on your lake.
Drink, for you can see the fishes.'
Otherwise, ace.