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nentwined replying on ritual of now intensified by nentwined 8 Apr 2004, 3:41 PM
Thanks. :)
some deleted user on ritual of now intensified by nentwined 8 Apr 2004, 3:40 PM
To enjoy what you can! Love it!
horus8 on ritual of now intensified by nentwined 8 Apr 2004, 3:13 PM
God, if you feel this way about coffee, you could write a fucking epic on the overlooked joys of crack cocaine
Caducus replying on Swan Lake by Caducus 8 Apr 2004, 3:11 PM
Throwing pebbles in to the water whenyour melancholy.
some deleted user on Swan Lake by Caducus 8 Apr 2004, 2:48 PM
A great image. Very nice! sorrows pebbles -> sorrow pebbles?
some deleted user on Beth by horus8 8 Apr 2004, 2:41 PM
I like this a lot. But please put a comma in "Ask the night Beth it knows." And the last line seems wrong, somehow, as if it should not be so positively convinced.
some deleted user on carpet by thing1 8 Apr 2004, 2:32 PM
A charming sketch of a moment in time. Nice
some deleted user on SEASON OF WINTER by galaxy4unknown 8 Apr 2004, 2:29 PM
Use King James English consistantly or not at all. THOU HAVE COME NOW -> Thou comest now, for example. Yet to stand by your love in the hard times is like getting through a hard winter - good thought.
horus8 on Metametahaiku by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8 Apr 2004, 2:13 PM
My hat has a helicopter pad.
zodiac replying on The Kings of Paradise by Spindle 8 Apr 2004, 1:35 PM
No. Have you ever smoked marijuana? I am. Did you know there are other jestery smokeable drugs that can be more accurately described as lacy than weed. No, I'd guess not, since you are the kind of person who'd say a poem is about 'drugs'.
Bachus on Swan Lake by Caducus 8 Apr 2004, 1:15 PM
Sin.
Bachus replying on Las Gaviotas by Bachus 8 Apr 2004, 1:03 PM
Thanks Christof, it's always a delight to hear from you, I hope all is well with you these days?
Spindle replying on The Kings of Paradise by Spindle 8 Apr 2004, 12:25 PM
Marijuana. "...roam jesters in lace/dancing round like the smoke in the sky." Get it?
Shuushin replying on The Kings of Paradise by Spindle 8 Apr 2004, 8:20 AM
it is? What kind of drugs?
Shuushin on SEASON OF WINTER by galaxy4unknown 8 Apr 2004, 8:13 AM
What's all the DAMN YELLING in here?? My gawd.
zodiac on SEASON OF WINTER by galaxy4unknown 8 Apr 2004, 7:48 AM
I HAVE THE SAME PROBLEM - MY KEYBOARD ONLY HAS CAPITAL LETTERS.
Christof on Las Gaviotas by Bachus 8 Apr 2004, 7:03 AM
It's been on the site so long and I've never seen it. t's great, really beautiful and delicate. This is tops.
wilco on SEASON OF WINTER by galaxy4unknown 8 Apr 2004, 6:29 AM
Yes, you need to fix the spelling errors, and I would not use "thou" so much (if at all).
anyone on SEASON OF WINTER by galaxy4unknown 8 Apr 2004, 6:18 AM
Foam in winter? A couple of spelling errors.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on The Kings of Paradise by Spindle 8 Apr 2004, 5:12 AM
WELL THAT'S NOVEL