poemranker ::Comments the most recent

CommentsComments 33081–33100 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

zodiac on Puritans by zodiac 20 Mar 2004, 3:34 PM
Oh, and thanks, richa, for letting me try out your style. I couldn't work in any woodland animals, though. Or A#P#P#L#E#S.
MaliqaTara on Snow Day by Standby 20 Mar 2004, 3:33 PM
Are you sure you didn't see yourself, someone should fuck your shit up for writing this.
MaliqaTara on Snow Day by Standby 20 Mar 2004, 3:33 PM
Are you sure you didn't see yourself, someone should fuck your shit up for writing this.
MaliqaTara on Snow Day by Standby 20 Mar 2004, 3:33 PM
Are you sure you didn't see yourself, someone should fuck your shit up for writing this.
MaliqaTara on Snow Day by Standby 20 Mar 2004, 3:33 PM
Are you sure you didn't see yourself, someone should fuck your shit up for writing this.
zodiac replying on Puritans by zodiac 20 Mar 2004, 3:30 PM
My wife sleepwalks to the kitchen late some nights and eats sugar out of the bowl. It seemed an appropriate opposite image for my Catholic-raised self-denial and pleasure-delaying. How do I make that more clear?
some deleted user on Puritans by zodiac 20 Mar 2004, 3:20 PM
Alright, I admit it, was one of them, with unraveled dreams on warm summer nights in kitchens animate with moonlight, but the rest I don't get, and maybe don't want to.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Senseless Murder by Sapphire2589 20 Mar 2004, 12:00 PM
Linkin Park lyrics + ellipses = GREAT POETRY!!!!!!! 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sapphire2589 on Masked by savannah 20 Mar 2004, 12:19 AM
dont like the cussing,there are spelling errors but it has a good idea behind it and im guess that you just wrote this when you were made,it was just a vent poem.
Sapphire2589 on Stolen Away by Carvaceous 20 Mar 2004, 12:13 AM
AWWW,how sad but true,im guessung that you are referring to being heartbroken,good job,nice write
Sapphire2589 on Text Messages Sent by blueENDyellow 20 Mar 2004, 12:12 AM
*shudders* that was creepy,nice write though,it could have flowed better though
Sapphire2589 on esopus creek by some deleted user 20 Mar 2004, 12:10 AM
kinda.....weird,but good,just confusing
Sapphire2589 on Friendship thrown away by cutiewithceli 20 Mar 2004, 12:03 AM
this is so true,i love this poem,and i loved how you wrote it,there is a little bit of "forced"ryming which i dont like but other than that it was great
Sapphire2589 on Coming out of the Darkness by ChunkyHunkyMonkey 20 Mar 2004, 12:01 AM
AWWW,i like this poem,good job
Standby on Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin 19 Mar 2004, 9:19 PM
Tight poem.
Standby on 'Fucky Fucky 5 Dollar' by scitz 19 Mar 2004, 9:15 PM
Funny poem. I really like it.
Standby on Dying Harvest by Richard 19 Mar 2004, 9:03 PM
Nice poem.
Standby on Strange Days, Indeed by Bachus 19 Mar 2004, 9:01 PM
Thanks for rambling on.Interesting, though.
zodiac replying on The Pedestal by Richard 19 Mar 2004, 7:59 PM
If I understand this comment right, then you don't believe it is possible to write anything that can be considered poetric except by stringing together meaningless cliches. Have you any idea what a pox-bearing turd-ball of a notion that is?
Richard replying on The Pedestal by Richard 19 Mar 2004, 2:12 PM
This is the revision for Mr. Google Cliché (zodia): The Pedestal: You’re Jane Doe, so what You’re here, great Life sucks when you’re not lucky Please look at me and smile. WOW! That’s art! But it still needs some revision: The Pedestal: You exist, Life Sucks, so smile Not quite there: The Pedestal: You and Life Suck, so smile Ah Ha! I’ve got it! The Pedestal: You suck and smile! THAT’S IT! Thank you so much for your insightful comments! I can surely win the Pulitzer Prize for this one!