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on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 7:40 PM
here's a bone for your dogs.
Like a stabbing pen & the poison pencil? :]
yes, yes. this is where the nutrient rich soil is. the back halls are the best. shhhhhhh.
I got yer twenty pardno! Bleh. It's just after being out there for so long, you realize that they do just as much damage to their image as others do. Yet with some small adjustments, alot can change. Kudos to your pops for knowing he didn't HAVE to be a driver. Most drivers don't want to recognise this fact. I seem to be having an awful time spelling tonight.
I've read just about all of horus'rants (and i traveled the moon after bouncing off pluto- a damn fun ride indeed)
Actually I've been reading up on alot of the rankers here, plus the old comments? Are fucking hilarious.
When you became a hapless romantic I lost all interest. Without the universe all around it is nothing but a two-dimensional depiction of romance
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replying on Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote
7 Jan 2004, 7:30 PM
Hmmm. I'm simple minded. And faithful. Yet, somehow, I don't feel victimized. Maybe I should have my riboflavin checked?
The above was a reply to INTRANSIT btw.
I didn't get some of those lines.. but I was able to comprehend some that gave me a clue as to what you were talking about, and I think thats enough to give me the morale of that...? ..anywyas, thanks.
means he was unsure of the spelling.
Oh, and did you let out enough steam'n frustration?
You know, my father was a truck driver when he was sixteen up until around twenty-eight or so before he took basic asm classes..
He ended up working for Amdahl and IBM later on.. and he never passed the 8th grade. (Not bad for a rough neck trucker eh?)
Does it really matter that your truckin' the usa? Your pushin it to the max either way..
And time is a funny son of a bitch. Honestly.
...mind me asking, what does "(sp?)" mean?
First time I read "America" I fell in love with the Psycho jew-nut, as I call him. Have you ever seen one of Horus 8s old rants?
He had some killers. ha!
Actually, I was reading his work before I snatched my notebook and started writing this exercise. (bastards a bit long-winded, but his work gets my juices boiling either way)
I agree. I also think, "why not have several tools in ones box"
I have yet to try any kind of writers block excercises (sp?).Mine usually passes within a few days, weeks, months... OH GOD!!! I'M STILL A TRUCK DRIVER!!!!Aggggg!
....and now back to our regularly scheduled programming.
I see three possibilities. In no particular order, the writers block thing (s-2), a poem about the sadness of people eating dogs(I know it's a staple, to them). And the (starving viet kids who like dog steaks) which says to me,"where are the poets who like crude poetry?". This is where I raise my hand. I heard some Ginsberg-ish echos here. Good enough? I can feel my hair silvering.
Well everyone has their ways of growing poetically..
but I figure aslong as one keeps reading poetry
and writes consistently progress will follow
depending on the poet.. adapt or die?
I love that saying, maybe we should
sell flags with that motto right here
at the poemranker alms store.
igpbgh. that is all.
Its a thought stream, so its supposed to have oddities... (one of my writers block exercises)
Didn't really consider touching it up,
but where else do you think I should tweak'n meliorate?
Ah, okay. Glad.
...Hm... I'll see about it.
..I still don't understand how book can help you - as long as you know all (or most) of the ways to write the poetry? ..*looks up at his poetry* ah - I see... dang!