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INTRANSIT on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme 7 Jan 2004, 7:40 PM
here's a bone for your dogs.
DreamerSupreme replying on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry 7 Jan 2004, 7:40 PM
Like a stabbing pen & the poison pencil? :]
INTRANSIT replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme 7 Jan 2004, 7:39 PM
yes, yes. this is where the nutrient rich soil is. the back halls are the best. shhhhhhh.
INTRANSIT replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme 7 Jan 2004, 7:37 PM
I got yer twenty pardno! Bleh. It's just after being out there for so long, you realize that they do just as much damage to their image as others do. Yet with some small adjustments, alot can change. Kudos to your pops for knowing he didn't HAVE to be a driver. Most drivers don't want to recognise this fact. I seem to be having an awful time spelling tonight.
DreamerSupreme replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme 7 Jan 2004, 7:33 PM
I've read just about all of horus'rants (and i traveled the moon after bouncing off pluto- a damn fun ride indeed) Actually I've been reading up on alot of the rankers here, plus the old comments? Are fucking hilarious.
A. Nomaly on Black Beach by Caducus 7 Jan 2004, 7:30 PM
When you became a hapless romantic I lost all interest. Without the universe all around it is nothing but a two-dimensional depiction of romance
Hmmm. I'm simple minded. And faithful. Yet, somehow, I don't feel victimized. Maybe I should have my riboflavin checked?
DreamerSupreme replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme 7 Jan 2004, 7:29 PM
The above was a reply to INTRANSIT btw.
Blindpoetry replying on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry 7 Jan 2004, 7:28 PM
I didn't get some of those lines.. but I was able to comprehend some that gave me a clue as to what you were talking about, and I think thats enough to give me the morale of that...? ..anywyas, thanks.
DreamerSupreme replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme 7 Jan 2004, 7:28 PM
means he was unsure of the spelling.
DreamerSupreme replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme 7 Jan 2004, 7:27 PM
Oh, and did you let out enough steam'n frustration? You know, my father was a truck driver when he was sixteen up until around twenty-eight or so before he took basic asm classes.. He ended up working for Amdahl and IBM later on.. and he never passed the 8th grade. (Not bad for a rough neck trucker eh?) Does it really matter that your truckin' the usa? Your pushin it to the max either way.. And time is a funny son of a bitch. Honestly.
Blindpoetry replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme 7 Jan 2004, 7:26 PM
...mind me asking, what does "(sp?)" mean?
INTRANSIT replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme 7 Jan 2004, 7:23 PM
First time I read "America" I fell in love with the Psycho jew-nut, as I call him. Have you ever seen one of Horus 8s old rants? He had some killers. ha!
DreamerSupreme replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme 7 Jan 2004, 7:19 PM
Actually, I was reading his work before I snatched my notebook and started writing this exercise. (bastards a bit long-winded, but his work gets my juices boiling either way)
INTRANSIT replying on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry 7 Jan 2004, 7:17 PM
I agree. I also think, "why not have several tools in ones box"
INTRANSIT replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme 7 Jan 2004, 7:14 PM
I have yet to try any kind of writers block excercises (sp?).Mine usually passes within a few days, weeks, months... OH GOD!!! I'M STILL A TRUCK DRIVER!!!!Aggggg! ....and now back to our regularly scheduled programming. I see three possibilities. In no particular order, the writers block thing (s-2), a poem about the sadness of people eating dogs(I know it's a staple, to them). And the (starving viet kids who like dog steaks) which says to me,"where are the poets who like crude poetry?". This is where I raise my hand. I heard some Ginsberg-ish echos here. Good enough? I can feel my hair silvering.
DreamerSupreme replying on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry 7 Jan 2004, 7:14 PM
Well everyone has their ways of growing poetically.. but I figure aslong as one keeps reading poetry and writes consistently progress will follow depending on the poet.. adapt or die? I love that saying, maybe we should sell flags with that motto right here at the poemranker alms store.
INTRANSIT on BreakBeat TimeTravel by nentwined 7 Jan 2004, 7:00 PM
igpbgh. that is all.
DreamerSupreme replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme 7 Jan 2004, 6:55 PM
Its a thought stream, so its supposed to have oddities... (one of my writers block exercises) Didn't really consider touching it up, but where else do you think I should tweak'n meliorate?
Blindpoetry replying on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry 7 Jan 2004, 6:54 PM
Ah, okay. Glad. ...Hm... I'll see about it. ..I still don't understand how book can help you - as long as you know all (or most) of the ways to write the poetry? ..*looks up at his poetry* ah - I see... dang!