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on Whose God? by elizabethann
3 Jan 2004, 4:31 AM
Like you, I also worship the insenstive, impure God of monstrously daft poetry.
Your comment is stupid in so many ways that I think it must be some sort of joke. Is it?
how you endowed angels and demons into this poem is why you are hopeless.
Have you ever got a zit in your ear?!!!!!! It's fucking murder.
Its very hard to beleve in GOD in this mad world
Finally, someone who feels my pain
If you can be so hooked on coffee. Never try DRUGS?
I like this poem. Wright poems just how you feel
dont take note of these first grade English dicks
who tell you every things wrong.......
You must be crazy!
whoa I really like this one, good work!
Preach it, man, preach it! :)
Oooh COOL, my poem is JUST LIKE SEX. The parenting part is pointless, it's kind of messy, and other than that very good.
:)
Thank you.
dude, if that was coherent it would probably be blasphemous. You should watch that; I heard they were going to start sending blasphemers to Faith-Based Rehabilitiation Kamps. I mean Camps.
You should relax. Don't take life so seriously. Think of it as a big game of Paintball. But, you know, SINGLE-SHOT Paintball. Pick a target and paintball it. None of this 3000 round hoppers & compressed air tanks on the back and running out into the middle of the field and hosing everything with an incoherent splatter of pink paint shit. Sheesh. That's just silly.
remember me, im the dude who wrote 'where was god', well it's my quite firm belife that There is no god to question, he doesn't exist...i bet you would love to know that i work at a Planned Parenthood office, If you liked that one, read this
New commandments
Your extinct god
Will bow down before me and call himself a fraud
And tell your poor abused children that I will end the animosity
I will be the one to set them free
The new ten commandments go as follows
He who prays, also wallows
Tho shalt not commit a crime
To buy your extinct god time
Tho shall destroy all idols
Tho shall burn every bible
Tho shall dine in thy own mercy
As soon as they can kill me
Tho shall sin in my name
And tho shall treat life as a game
Tho shalt not rape thy mother
Tho shalt not love thy brother
For the final preparation
To assure the restoration
Tho shall sing for satan
To give back all you have taken
some conjuringing? a curse? Have a snowman; eat his nose.
oo oo - I just wrote this (like a week ago)!
<A Chemical Story>
Neurotransmitting friends:
my dynorphin, beta endorphin
and enkephalins.
Throughout the holidays, helping me;
reacting to the call of substance (P),
keeping me free of Marleyâs chains,
and various stress-induced pains.
Thereâs been many a party enjoyed
through my endogenous opioids;
from mu (both things 1 and 2) to epsilon
(theyâll visit with you from dusk till dawn).
Theyâre as dear as a table of Tiny Tims;
I love them each drug as a son -
God bless the little endorphins,
every one.
He was HANGING ON THE CROSS bleeding his guts out so that...so that, um, SO HIS FATHER COULD LET YOU INTO HEAVEN instead of having to send you to ETERNAL DAMNATION, you ungrateful clod. Don't be deceived by letting SATAN MAKE YOU THINK THERE's SO MUCH EMPHASIS on this physical plane. God is concerned with our SOULS not with our PHYSICAL BODIES. Sometimes what he IS FORCED TO DO TO COMBAT SATAN and save our ETERNAL SOULS is hard for us to understand with our emphasis on EARTHLY CONCERNS. Since your cousin OD'd she's DEFINITELY GOING TO HELL, but maybe if she'd lived 10 years longer she would have had two little babies and DECEIVED THEM INTO HELL TOO!!!!! So God had to take her now to SAVE THE BABIES FROM HELL!!!! Who are YOU to QUESTION GOD?
I give it a 7... i think it is an ok poem. But the only thing that turns me down is the whole God thing... but thats only me. Still, pretty well written...