NoSage
on 0 by MacFrantic
27 Nov 2003, 8:26 PM
My my, aren't we full of ourselves?
free of what? is death a blessing for us or a curse? i don't quite agree with the content, but its a good poem, 7
same here (strangely at 3.30 every day)
More a senryu (a haiku has a nature theme). Giving this a nature theme would be impressive.
Good though, the soft feel of the words and then bang.
typo line 2.
Admirable sentiment, this if more concise could pack a harder punch, nevertheless i liked where you went with it.7
oh yeah ! By the way the name please of the grandfather clock (ripping its guts out poem please????)
I took everything I had
and put it underground to decay,
and welcomed the invisible world.
A world of the unseen vitamin,
where thoughts become the
granules of life.
Where dirt is edible and tastes
like the sun.
Ah well, DreamerSupreme has been getting zeroed for about two months now- slowly and sporadically.
But yesterday someone has zerobombed almost all of my poetry under SD- some which I was very proud of, or had high averages, like Aluminum Xena, Memoirs of a Monk, and Padres Gumbo.
I usually don't care who gives the occassional anon zero- but in this case I do, simply to know and perhaps get a clue as to why they zerobombed me.
I'm sure not anything close to a "mature" poet- I've done plenty of wild stunts. But zerobombing a persons entire archive? Never. I'm a roguish jester poet- not a pathetic one. Wouldn't even do it to the person that zerobombs me.
says what a haiku does , a haiku about a haiku - novel idea 7
L3 makes this ! 8
I've been checking your vote archives and from what i see, someone is zeroing you out of petty revenge.
At least I know your better than that.
Liked the Picasso reference in S1 and the unrelenting mood of violence you have created, makes me want to kill the bastard.
Good stuff
ditto
Been there.
Letting go for Jesu, though I'm no Jew (Beeric) by No one (Free verse) by horus8
I aint no couchey comfort eagle
And I aint no swingin' chunk o sac
Got my fair share of poetic doubles
And now there's no turning back
Thought I'd learnt from my previous swan dives
that the Lord takes his spuds with sour cream & chives
And when I needed my friends to pay?
They said "You have AIDS, and you are gay".
So I jumped anyway like Wile E. Coyote.
Another whitey on display, trippin' on peyote
stuffed Frioles.
But I'm letting go for Jesu
We're gonna smoke da kind bowl
Yeah I'm letting go for Jesu
He's gonna get catty on my pole.
When life has got your number
And you're livin' in the gutter
Then welcome to my world, Scutter (Like in Carnivale)
It ain't all spread out with duck butter
Billy Jean streets is all you'll get
And all you gotta do is go Chet (Like in Weird Science)
'cos when life knocks you up, brother
You don't always pull a Pink Panther
and fuck a 'sick' transexual belly dancer.
But I'm letting go for a Jesu
He's gonna keep me real sane
Yeah I'm letting go for your Jesu
and all his rocked up cocaine.
Well I found myself in cheap whiskey
And I held myself on piped smack
Knew I'd hit top drawer, oh baby
Though I'd lost my favourite Hackey Sackey
But I opened up my beef heart to you
Turned over a brand new dark sheet
I dedicate my life, Jesu
My art, my heart, my feet
Feet cleaning is what you do.
that's why I fell in love with you.
Yeah, I'm letting go for Jesu
He's gonna scrape my last bowl
Yeah I'm holding on for Jesu
He's gonna save my soul
He's gonna stoke my coal
He's worth the big let go
Ask little Joe from KOKOMO
and the dragonless from Komodo.
I feel the same way about the time I bumped into a wet roll of toilet paper.
Humbled as the bumble:o)
thanx.
hooollldin' onn for Jeeesuss....i can practically hear the music
baby-shit