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INTRANSIT on Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 25 Nov 2003, 7:29 PM
beautiful funny nonsense. and what of your screen play? my hooven brother.
Samantha on Cut by TheVampireLeStan 25 Nov 2003, 4:46 PM
wow. that was really good. i liked it alot.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Lines and half lines by aliena 25 Nov 2003, 4:28 PM
Glue the pile? To your face.
SupremeDreamer on Intersection by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 3:10 PM
Hrmm. well, its choppy flow suits it.. but that second gaze.. Perhaps phase? ;/ oi. Well, I'm known to braze- but today I flicker and smoke. Its very raw stuff, good though; it has room to form itself, and even change colors like a cameleon. I'll save my vote for now, second and third looks will probly change my outlook on it. much fun to be had with this piece.
INTRANSIT replying on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 2:58 PM
aye, aye, we shall.
SupremeDreamer replying on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 2:55 PM
Sounds wonderful! But ofcourse, we must begin the journey in Liege... then travel cross- sampling nipples ranging in size, form, and flavor- washing away various scarlet knuckle spots before we stroke a fresh bosom. My comrade.. we will carve a hall to rome; and it shall be great.
INTRANSIT replying on Breeding ground. by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 2:47 PM
I know. The irony here is, I was born in NY. NYC infrirmary.'67. My parents moved us all to Colorado when I was three. My grandmother took me back and on a ferry trip for a few days. I made mention of this in my poem "common ground" New York aint (all) bad.
INTRANSIT replying on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 2:18 PM
I'm sold. I like you. ...so spaniard, we will go to rome together, and have bloody adventures and the great hall will suckle us until we are fat and happy and can suckle no more....
SupremeDreamer replying on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 2:02 PM
Ofcourse it is! with imagination? its up to the minds delight. Sadly though, not many will actually go through the trouble to unravel a poem- its amazing how many people get turned off when they might need to jolt up the noggen. In the end though, I feel a poem that has room for movement and is flexible in meaning and thought lives longer: theres room for it to evolve on its own.
INTRANSIT replying on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 12:18 PM
I suppose we're a different breed of poet. We prefer to let people get what they want from it vs. making them see or feel a certain way. After all, life itself is open ended, yes?
tadpole on Gone (75) by shadowaura 25 Nov 2003, 12:03 PM
nice
SupremeDreamer replying on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 12:03 PM
Well.. yes, because theres a sickness with a good amount of readers- they think we have to imagine for them. (or be clear spoken and snub out the element of mystery.) Its ok man, I'm on your side- everyones yammered at me for being "cryptic". Oh, and heres a ten.
tadpole on Severed by shadowaura 25 Nov 2003, 12:01 PM
whoa! love it
tadpole on freewrite~1-10-10/11am by shadowaura 25 Nov 2003, 11:58 AM
pretty cool
SupremeDreamer on Revolution by Nitroxide 25 Nov 2003, 11:49 AM
I said the same thing when I was thirteen? And realized that it's much more complicated than that. blessed with 6.
tadpole on Come home by phbiscuit 25 Nov 2003, 11:45 AM
I like the jist of it . . . 9
Dan garcia-Black on Tribute to "The Cow" by eyrbare 25 Nov 2003, 11:40 AM
Good. I always say, "Milk a cow and you have drink for a day. Milk a bull and you have a friend for life."
INTRANSIT replying on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 11:38 AM
Is it so wrong that I leave something to the readers imagination?
Dan garcia-Black on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 11:33 AM
Real.
Dan garcia-Black on Lines and half lines by aliena 25 Nov 2003, 11:30 AM
Been there. You make a great stone soup.