INTRANSIT
replying on An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485
25 Nov 2003, 10:56 AM
Ok. I missed the point. Touche. I still think it needs better organized.
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YES!!
Um, refreshing?
I don't know what FUBAR means.
In fact, I don't understand anything you said.
Sounds like somebody cut you off on the Grand Central Parkway! Yeah some of what goes on in this city sucks but, to be honest with you, I've lived here all my life and desire to live no other place in the world. While it is true that NYC often reveals the worst possible human qualities it is also is loaded with great people doing great things every day. Unfortunately these people and their stories don't get much press so we are left only with the type of stereotype so elegantly reflected in your poem. By the way. Lady Liberty does not collect patina....she undergoes a thorough washing every six months.
Isolation didn't make me happy. Leaving my house and strolling in san fran for 5 days did wonders though.
Blessed with seven.
Yeah, but now I'm worried about the tips I'll give her. Usually no one pays attention my advice... You'll make sure to squash me when my advice is shit right?- Insurance for free?
If life is a box of chocolates make mine Godiva dahlin. This piece is unique I like it Iam true to my selve's a wink from all of us. Chucles and giggles. I crown you with a 10!
Wow dude, my mom is asking you to give her tips. That's a compliment.
How about Sancho Panzas puberty... for the untitled heh,heh.Don I'am encantada que leiste mi poema, si es verdad sobre el tema 8 que lo de la harmonica quizas le falta practica, pero es uno de mis bebe's.And has alot of potential please, you are invited to continue giving me tips and bettering my poetry. how about the sonnata of the windmills..Thank you.Ciao bello!.
INTRANSIT - ill say u doing great
Better sit by that TV, INTRANSIT, its gonna help u understand a little of what i have said â How the darn protesters behave and the Adds are just as inane. You sud sit by me with a cup of coffee and just waste a good hour by the tube â then stand take a deep breath and say what ever your heart desires. I am a 100& plenty on the fact that u gonna grin, pat me on me back and say â ShaNoN, thnx for opening my eyes:o)
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let's fly. I'll sprinkle you with stardust, and smooth out your golden wings.
Einstein believed in the afterlife? energy does not die; it changes form. Found that to be interesting- his quotes? these ones make me grin:
"The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education."
"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
"A question that sometimes drives me crazy: am I? or are the others crazy?"
Im clicking my heels aunty M..I wish it was so easy to go home again...out on a rod ironed adorned balcony I I breathe in the cold air of the andes and run down the marbled and very polished stairs,for my daily hot chocolate with grandmummi..hot bread and honey butter at six a.m. thanks for taking me back. un 10 para usted phbiscuit, me encanto!.
Advertiser and Protestants do little research; they just start of with what they can get their hands on:o)
Anything with tea leaves get's my atention the french word's could have been de ja vu..or vu le vous, giggle softly in your ear..or je te aime..under the umbrella perhaps sacreblu! at the sight of the millepede and butterfly very er,,otique. Getting wet is very fun and primal i will open up a umbrella in the shower,thunder shower,passing shower,bathroom shower heh..heh..and hope for the best. For arousing my imagination, merci.
I suck at spelling too.. ;/
(infact, h8 got me to misspell transparency twice in a row? then DA used it against me.. memories..)
have you ever tried www.spellcheck.net? I use it after inspecting my work by-myself- Actually has helped me to improve my spelling, but meth+typing? another snag all together.