Don-Quixote
replying on A "sirius"makeover by The_Third_Isis
24 Nov 2003, 7:41 PM
h8's music? pretty good.. but his harmonica tunes? a reason to kill.
I have read all your poems, voted on them aswell, but didn't comment till this one- not sure why.
A writer improves his/her skill always- its constant. (but then again, some others live in denial? or quit poetry and start a 2000 pg. rose-diary)
En espanol? anglais, francaise et wallon je comprenez- pas espanol (and im very bad at reading/writing french or walloon.. speaking french? np. walloon? a mouthful to say the least.)
I wish I could.
aussie friends, thankfully I haven't started using the word "mate".
[oh, and oxy-masks then ???? - bastage.. my crumpet is goin bonkers deciphering that comment.]
God cannot keep you from me my love. lol.
OI!
I'am overwhelmed by your talents... I can only give you a 10!! luv 8 your MUMMI
Tora..Tora..Tora !! remenber pearl harbour? think, all about ancestors and pride as oposed and not to be confused with torah ..never mind.
MEAOW...grrrrrrr a nine, por vou.
Knife (phalic?) deep into your..(froidian) weep. slowly bathe in your blood.
Annointing "myself" smiling showing my incisors. deep(again? hmmm) red your body.You are an image adored/admired by me.What passion! Je te adore..Thanx by the way for your poetic genetic remark on "sirius" make over. I am lucky to have suns who are talented Good looking 10+.Poetic/art/music/acting.
Si vu ..please ,overlook my misspells. Ciao bello!
Oi.. this is now my favorite haiku- next to the stoner series.
Saskae
Try teenage prostitution, it works and kills you too. lol.
lol.
mooooving right along. Lets create one for the bulls that will take a little longer.Altough the sheet will smell the same. this is cute and not toooo lame. I had a cow for lunch today..thanx moooooo. a nine.
The milk was cold and deep, wasn't it? and you thought you would be speaking. lol.
I thought it said poppy. lol.
I just think islands is a sad metaphor. Men sent to oppose tyranny from a King who acquired a commonwealth through tyranny. These men ended up killed by the very crown and catle they were protecting, ironic and sick. Also moats are there to protect a kingdom and these men became islands in moats (again islands) of which became there graves, and of which remained undiscovered forever. I could try and make this clearer as i have such deep thoughts on it yet found it challenging to even touch upon.
THanks to everyone for commenting on this, it's a theme close to me as I had a Grandfather who fought in WW2 his father beforehim in ww1
Starbucks as in the star of david {they own it} if it wasnt so good the (coffe pickers not growers)like the (coca)would not drink or chew? it unless they had 2 quench the hunger..you should see it first hand to understand. And mean whyle back at the "ranch" Boston had a tea party, and here in the land of Oz we get our eyebrows waxed by the scarecrow and have our nails and feet licked by TOTO over chai...Is this to deep? lets let that tea bag seep.in the meantime we will let "them" over in the third world plant harvest our drug of choice,death will eat us silly but it all depends on our genetic make up.Death will come knocking no matter what.So hillbillie or astronaut caffeine puts me to sleep, must be a part eastern european,IncaMix you are a comedian I honour you with a nine.X'cuse my spelling.Ssssssssss
lmao nice!
folding beds and oxy-masks then ?. oi.. you've given me a brain fart again my friend, refresh & elucidate me.