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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Slayer Sucks by peaceseeker 22 Oct 2003, 3:44 PM
I saw Slayer in Lon-Don during the summer. Afterwards, I witnessed a young South American man excitedly shaking his friend and shouting about how ace he thought the concert was. That cancels out all the dullards, dunces, posers, buncombes, oldsters, youngsters, hipsters, holsters, s'mores and sega rallys that you may have encountered.
Something lewd; Something rewd; Something newd;
Hmm, well, I think you could probably spend some time rolling this over in your mind to come up with a more creative way of expressing what you feel. The language is just very dry. I get what your saying, and you speak it clearly, but maybe that's your angle.
abecedarian replying on Go On a Business Trip by abecedarian 22 Oct 2003, 3:15 PM
I think your right brain's left ear is more attune to my intent here.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Go On a Business Trip by abecedarian 22 Oct 2003, 3:06 PM
I've never done one really. At least as far as the left brain's definition of one goes.
<~> replying on Mr. America (Hunting Season) by SupremeDreamer 22 Oct 2003, 2:30 PM
okay, so if hunting was not you base metaphor, what is? help a stupid blonde out, wouldja?
What do you think about hunting?
SupremeDreamer replying on Mr. America (Hunting Season) by SupremeDreamer 22 Oct 2003, 1:34 PM
its not a _BASE_ metaphor, first off, so who gives a shit? second, so what if ive never hunted animals? plus, animals werent my target.. you getting my drift captain nemo? but its nice to know that youve suddenly taken an interest. good bye. :)
<~> on glimpses by nentwined 22 Oct 2003, 11:56 AM
nice language, k. you have managed to paint it without a tick on dr. carawax's list. bueno.
horus8 on 3am by Nicholas Jones 22 Oct 2003, 11:39 AM
That or thinner thighs.
<~> replying on My Chocolate F-9 by abecedarian 22 Oct 2003, 11:37 AM
what about the varnish? talk about the pines that gave it, and how patient they were to give their blood for the sharpened D of eternity. maybe you drink a chocolate colored guiness (or 2) while you wait for the chocolate varnish to dry. the last quatrain--just scrap it, and go from there. why do we run out of steam like that, i wonder?
abecedarian replying on My Chocolate F-9 by abecedarian 22 Oct 2003, 11:32 AM
Correct on all points. Although only ~$400 if you make it yourself (assuming one doesn't screw it up).
abecedarian replying on My Chocolate F-9 by abecedarian 22 Oct 2003, 11:31 AM
Good points. There is a machine called a thickness sander. So when one is using it one is 'thickness sanding' although I don't like the name either. True it is 'only' a month, but that month is composed of 'everything' else that must be done for completion of the project. Thank you for the good read.
god'swife on glimpses by nentwined 22 Oct 2003, 10:48 AM
Wow, good for you. Much more depth then I've seen from you before. Could you move the 1st stanza inbetween some of the others? I think the second stanza would do much better as teh first, nice strong intro.
horus8 on Slayer Sucks by peaceseeker 22 Oct 2003, 10:46 AM
Sounds like you missed a wonderful opportunity to corn hole a corn hole.
god'swife on 3am by Nicholas Jones 22 Oct 2003, 10:43 AM
More please.
As long you stick a parasol in it I don't care.
Yes, yes, yes, and YES! That's what I enjoy about you! Your sobriety keeps you very aware.
Regular or extra creamy?
god'swife on My Chocolate F-9 by abecedarian 22 Oct 2003, 10:37 AM
'thickness' sanded? How, does thickness sand? 4th stanza- 'everything' or the only thing? The only thing left between me and my chocolate f-9 is a month, and then finally I'll hear her sing. The unbearable urge to rush is a disaster, waiting. So patience for once, do this right, just for once as I should.