Shuushin
replying on September 11, 2001: That Day by blues361
18 Oct 2003, 4:45 PM
MAN, you totally crack me up. (seriously and without any malice or sarcasm)
Yes, to be gang raped by the clergy is always memoriable.
In what way was "history different forever"? Did the events of September 11th 2001 alter the past? No. Or perhaps you mean that history on September 12th 2001 was different from that on September 10th 2001 because it contained the events of the 11th. But that would have been the case whatever happened. In conclusion, you're an idiot.
You should read this open mic one night in Hiroshima dressed up in a wetsuit with flippers and a bucket of sardines.
"The U.S. staying stong
That Day"
YES! I agree one hundred percent
in fact "staying stong" was the last
thing my japanese baby said to me that fateful day, bleu... May I call you bleu? Thank you, where was I? Ah yes... Right before my little Jung Kao Pao was toasted along with my arms to a slight off brown sausages in an breeze of atomic radioactive scorching poison. Microwaved, if you will. That's why, my friend, I will give you the 10 you've been yearning for. Though it will make you think it's a big fat Zero? Trust me my friend. It's lying. It's a ten and it knows it.
No, unless you get me a limo with a jello spa and women that shut up when told to... Oh and mai tais.
I lost my best friend ever - my wife. I often want to look back, but know - that to exist, I must not turn my gaze. The voice is in front, looking back at me.
Good job.
The voices in my head (I too am not alone) often tell me to jump - which I do, straight up - until I realize that gravity is not my friend. I find myself falling right back in, my sudden grip lost. My torment. Nice.
What's the point in praying for someone after they're dead? The whole point of Hell is that once you're there, you're there forever. The idea that you could somehow convince God to let them out just by praying is incredibly childish and ignorant.
SEE now that's a SONNET!
I knew you could do it.
may i suggest something? you can't assume someone is in heaven, not at all, all we can say is we hope they are and keep praying for them. good poem though 10
Oooops! My apologies sir! I obviously hit the wrong key.r
However, I enjoy a good spanking from time to time. I think I'll hold out for the quail though.
ROFL. that's hilarious. absolutely hilarious.
this totally cracked me up. though i don't exactly understand the second verse. i mean, usually it's the guys who bail, right?
You have a very distinctive and individual style, which I like. I think you may enjoy some of my work (although it is sometimes misunderstood).
I think he is trying to describe the serious problem of his habitual bloodletting through the application of leeches (An ancient practice that is regaining credibility in modern medical circles). Of course, this would have initially been for medicinal purposes, but users have been known to develop a grotesque dependence on the practice.
first verse: 10
Second verse: 0
Average: 5
I think it's a good job you copyrighted this poem, in case any poetry tycoons try to steal your work. -10-