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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on مصادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly 14 Oct 2003, 3:40 AM
**** POEMERANKER PLAGIARISM ALERT ****
abecedarian on Turncoat by poetandknowit 14 Oct 2003, 12:03 AM
Something fierce. And the single rhyme in this - fate/wait - well played, that bit. (I must confess to be ignorant of the background - saudi arabia? egypt?)
SupremeDreamer replying on The Pedagogue and his son by SupremeDreamer 13 Oct 2003, 11:48 PM
corrected
*Lyrisick* on Night Terrors by princesszoe 13 Oct 2003, 10:54 PM
Wow! If i am impressed i am to the fullest!
kingit on Vampires and sunblock 3000 by SupremeDreamer 13 Oct 2003, 9:25 PM
that's what's been happening to me...denial works better with paranoia
Geschäftsreise on The Pedagogue and his son by SupremeDreamer 13 Oct 2003, 9:03 PM
Hopefully your dad will correct your spelling. In your dreams that is. ;) - it's "c'est la vie" (to be pedagogical)
kingit on werk by kingit 13 Oct 2003, 8:58 PM
you opine!- cute has it's merits
electroman1979 on NUMERO UNO by gorbichoff 13 Oct 2003, 7:46 PM
pretty good, write some more 10
Geschäftsreise replying on مصادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly 13 Oct 2003, 7:45 PM
By the way, Alex, you owe me a well reasoned response to every single one of my Babelfish poetry for this Herculean effort.
Geschäftsreise replying on مصادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly 13 Oct 2003, 7:43 PM
Hello z, here is the translation you requested... --------------------- "Confiscated Palestine" (I call my translation “News from Israel”) The orphans await confirmation of but a single chapter in the Road Map by the Security Council Egyptian Foreign Minister Ahmed Maher praised the Russian envoy Vdovin confirmed the importance of action on both sides and support from the Quartet for execution of the Road Map Meanwhile, in the field, the Israeli occupation forces detained five members of Islamic Jihad in Araba, south of Jenin. A reminder
god'swife on The Red Tree by raysaun 13 Oct 2003, 7:03 PM
in the last stanza change 'saw' to 'felt'. Also snowballs can only be made my people, not trees. Find some other way to say it.
god'swife on conundrum, part 1 by poetekzen 13 Oct 2003, 7:01 PM
meandering. clever, but only at first.
god'swife on Forever Tired by Antares42 13 Oct 2003, 6:58 PM
Boring
sliver on standing on the dry weeds by silvertongueddevil 13 Oct 2003, 6:08 PM
I especially like the 3rd + 4th Stanzas. Well done.
Geschäftsreise replying on مصادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly 13 Oct 2003, 5:58 PM
I also am an ignorant, blacklisted Terrorist-American (Green Party affiliation) - similarly unskilled yet interested in language. Certainly I will post my (meager) translation. Give me until tomorrow to rebuild/polish it. Or maybe I'll show you mine if you show me yours.
Shuushin on sit place by kingit 13 Oct 2003, 5:35 PM
my poor aching [split] brain. I keep trying to see patterns. ooo - you could d o u b l e s p a c e them too!(seriously). Maybe with chicken brule, btw.
Shuushin on thanksgiving by kingit 13 Oct 2003, 5:25 PM
eenteresting... very eenteresting....
SupremeDreamer on Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom 13 Oct 2003, 5:24 PM
bunny wabbit, ltns. ace poem btw. 9.
Shuushin on Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom 13 Oct 2003, 5:11 PM
The ending is fairly awesome. I don't like that [the droplets] soaked into the floor; either I think of a cement floor in a factory, or via the title, a glass floor.
<~> replying on مصادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly 13 Oct 2003, 5:06 PM
any chaance, oh ambiguously gendered traveller, of posting what you've come up with, for those of us who've been blacklisted by gwb by registering at ajeeb, only to find out that we need $30 to get the answer? i am an ignorant american, and my language skills are poor.