Maybe the writer's block is over? I've a few more comong along now. People seem to like this one, I'm pleased!

Is that a good thing of a bad thing? I'd think it was a good thing gone bad. Solid gravy that is.

you may be semi-serious but you are a full time semi serious participant on this site. All this crap about genius and cruelty, its true. I went to shake stephen hawkings hand the other day, bastard electricuted me ha haaaa ha

Dear Shuushin, No problem on the crits, it is what the poem is here for, there are plenty of sites where they only dish out 'encouragement'. It helps me to look at th poem anew.

What Golden Tablets? As far as I know they only ever existed in Joseph's imagination, the angel taking them back to heaven is just a cover up, one more lie to top all the others.

Dear ~ Your apollogy does you credit, no hard feelings, I am not perfect either.

good call, edited my orig. copy.

oh well, cant make everyone laugh. -shrug-

hahahahaha i live in space.

darkie, your my most fawowite pal!

ohhhhhh sheeeeit, no you di'int!!!!!!!!

to the top.

once my band records the song, i'll let you hear it through an mp3. it works, i promise.