Pervy Elf
replying on Little Girl by Pervy Elf
25 Sep 2003, 12:05 AM
Ha ha...and maybe next time try being a bit less contrite.
Have a nice day.
Screw you too.
Internet Love gone Amok!
...on the next Springer!!
very very good. check your mail, we'll talk.
Simply love it. Sex and violence in the media. Who can go wrong?
Yes, and my Lady Macbeth is the sweetest of these.
Hmmmm... Is that a good 'hmmmm', or a bad 'hmmmmm'?
Hmmmmmm.......
Me, yes. Him, no.
Yea, sometimes life is sweet, sometimes it's the extra's.(The deck, afternoon brunches, Lady McBeth?)
Sometimes it's time alone.
Well, if you must know...first comes first. I have been known to be cute from time to time. Some even dare to call me beautiful.
BUT! Back to Him. Well, while the central figure in the poem is myself, the fact that the H is capitalized is supposed to give more impact and meaning to the guy. It's hard for me to explain. When read, one is supposed to get a sense of helplessness (is that even a word?) on the girls' behalf. She's trying to get the guy to notice and take stock of what he has done. Basically, take responsibility of his actions. I don't know, maybe that helps...?
O.K. you need to answer my questions in order, so are you cute? (I'm a man, I have to ask, AGAIN)And why capitolize the H in him?
No, not God. It's about a boy...geez, aren't all things? I was extremely hurt by this guy, and we were having many problems at the time. I wasn't exactly talking to him, and this was my way to kind of tell him something was wrong. So, yeah, "Him" is the guy.
Capitol H Him. Do you mean God? I'm sure not, so why capitolize "him" ?The beginning of each line in a poem should be cap'd.
You are still so young. Don't stress it. If it's not right, don't worry about it. Move on and don't look back.Life's too short to deal with assholes. Are you cute by the way? I'm a poet you know. Read some of mine. Tell me what you think. just click my name.