-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
23 Sep 2003, 5:08 PM
Jesus died for you.
Do you know what the word is for the 'gorgeous'/'poor, just' device? It's not really a proper rhyme. There has to be some word for it that I'm not aware of.
I would if it weren't for the shackles. Not metaphorical shackles you understand; actual shackles.
And you say nmy poetry is lame? Well well well...I have noticed that about 99.9% of your poetry is on the bottom 20 list and mine is well..not..You can take you comments and shove them straight up your no talent ass you fucking hipocrit..
i feel sorry for your childhood trauma it´s time you come out of the closet.
Oh my... That sounds lovely. The piece could stand an edit. An the meantime here's an eight.
Oh, I see... I wrote a new book called "Juno's Peacock". Would you like to read it?
we haven't met but he does seem to be a fan mine as I am of his work. Btw no relation b/t the title and the Poemranker user.
Good lord, I didn't know you guys had met?
Jeremi B. Handrinos
replying on THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
23 Sep 2003, 11:33 AM
lel.
Did you watch Carnivale last night?
Over and out.
A haiku is based on an old form of Japanese poetry. It is usually a poem written in 3 lines with a rhythm of 5-7-5. I.e. 5 words on the 1st line, 7 on the second and 5 on the last. All the words in the poem are linked and are essential to the poem. There is a better explanation on this site, Kaolin fire has it somewhere under poems. Thanks. :) have a good one.
multi-character thought patterns...
Another virgin lost to sex, wonderful poem..TURN ME ON SOME MORE..YUM..YUM 10
Blackmailing the ranker? Not quite a chain letter, but witty. An average 5 from me.
It is a fragment. I plan on expanding it eventually.
The key to the (not really well thought out) metaphor is:
daedalus machine = computer/internet
Yes.
Wow, you were talking about orangutans all along.
I have now corrected the assumption error which seemed to have been keeping this poem off the top of the "best" list.