nentwined
on lament and retrograde by Don-Quixote
17 Sep 2003, 6:22 PM
I like 'too proud to scrawl' (as elsewhere read), though then the wheelchair might need something to replace it.
interesting, though. :) 7.
cute imagery, flow I think could make this really nice. 7.
some nice ideas. I don't feel the flow lends to the feeling of sleep deprivation (even though it may have been created by such; I could find much of one)...
eh?
7 for confusing me because I'm tired of giving out 4's.
this should be under 'concrete', no?
do I really have to make an 'ascii art' category?
[[would people use it if I did?]]
la la la.
cute, given its history.
Ha ha ha whoever gave this a blue five is a lesbian vegetarian albanian cock ring of fire, and I didn't fall into.
I enjoyed the poem. I think line one needs to be tweeked a little or what was the purpose of it? "you are dreamer" I almost didn't read on due to that being the first line. I just see my four year old neise saying that to me.
C notes don't go on single games here. I'm not that stupid anyone can win one game. But ta-won spots go on single games (twenty) mini of 5 games. C notes go on races typically to 10 with weight. Play eight or nine ball? Ring nine and three ball are big gambling games around here. Three ball is a joke, break as hard as you can a little off from head ball drop one or two every time...easy money.
C notes preferably
Faustiatious
Beautiful, GQTip Awarde
perfection. [[eloquently painted]]
i know
pretty good stuff
hello
Congrats hun. Na poemranker isn't getting me down. I've just had a lack of things to write about. Bad choice of words, you know how I never have a lack to write about. Just all the good stuff hits me at bad times. I don't get the few starting lines wrote down. Then when I have a chance to finally write something down I've forgot them and can't remember them for the life of me. So I just wrote...something...
aww how sweet. it brought tears to my eyes. *sniff sniff* 10
i will bless this poem with an 8.
poemranker getting you down KC? well i hope it gets better. one of my poems is a semi-finalist in a contest going on to the big contest. i hope my poem wins. plus i am getting the poem in the contest published. probably.
hehe 10