Don-Quixote
on Easter Egg Soup by kthay
28 Aug 2003, 2:57 PM
hrmm.. childish.. makes me wonder: didnt your remember that the sun exists, and that its hot? do you remember that chocolate tends to melt when heated?..
slightly funny though.. ill give you that.
5.
and you dare to belittle my poems? crawl back into your fucking hole you worthless fraud. 0
short, sweet.. but im left hanging.. why?
tip: if your going to do miniatures.. make sure you dont leave any holes in the paper when you turn it in.
5
After the way you have treated me, I hate to say this but this is an excellent poem. I can be objective, can you?
no.. this doesnt do it.. i didnt think my I'm Back poem could be made worse or done in a crappier fashion.. but you convinced me.. really.. what the hell was the purpose in making this poem? 0
get a plane ticket? ;/ 7.
I give the first half a ten, the second half a 7. That averages out to 8.5, and I'll round it up to 9.
i never really did care much for his poetry.
Or, if you're a genius like me, you can just copy and paste.
First, I don't even think this qualifies as Haiku.
Second, you are a misogynist. This is a real -0-
Poe
Its a her? ah.. well, you two seem to have gotten to know each other.
tues and sundays aye? what street you work on? :P
Crotchless floss gumming.
You mean like malnutrition? Or splinters. Because, I get quite queer for hard boiled eggs and tweezers.
not insignifigant.. simply pale compared to understanding..
"was it the love"
love? cute.. now explain, or ofcourse: dont respond.. spare yourself exposing the fact that your brain is small.
Love of death? death is merciful, mortality? hrmm.. mortality.. nifty lil word to bring up along with death, your really making me think.. not.. god your fucking pathetic and boring.
Where the hell did you come from? eh? i have a sudden smart ass popping out of someones ass to make "witty" comments to in some way clown the poem or me..
back away, go back to your seat, and let someone who can do it right bash away at me.. like dark angel, eh? he puts some actual spice to it.. shit that counts.. your crappy lil burps are the product of a wanna-be.
"Or maybe tits"
thats cute, bring up tits.. do you fantasize about tits "hand"? do these fantasies cause your palms to sweat? does sweaty hands make you giddy and are you grateful to have lubrication to masturbate while thinking about "tits"? do you want me to ram your head into a rotting carcass?
Let me guess... you are a lonely piece of poop look for a way back up and in. That's just brilliant 10 CHUDS FOR YOU.
And in emergencies, of course. 8.
Another example of a fine observation.