Y2kSlamPoet
replying on $ by Crakyamuni
28 Aug 2003, 4:20 PM
what.. your going to duel me with your 8th grade remarks.. *laugh* oh please.. your not worth the time, or effort, and i wouldnt enjoy beating on the retarded and sexually depraved.
Let me see. You can call yourself SATAN, but you don't like the word nigger, and you're Canadian? i grew up in Detroit, La. Chicago and some other pretty notorious hotspots friend and I assure you they were full of NIGGERS, GREASY SPICS AND STUPID FUCKING REDNECKS, and i will ride them all to hell nude with nigger tattoed on both of my ass cheeks and the side of my cock shaft, and I will lose no sleep over it. I suggest you discover lenny bruce, he was a white nigger jew.
Words are a poets to choose as he will. You've been socially brainwashed to endow them with more than they deserve. My dark brown friends get a hoot out of calling eachother nigger all day long while doing the same music video over and over and over again FUCK THEM!, my Jew friends make a fortune off of exploiting the hell out of it, and me and you are still broke and out of the loop wondering what in the fuck we have to do to survive. Pull up one pant leg over a knee? Perhaps wear a band aid on a zit on my face and pretend it's for my brother in prison when I just have an acne problem. Perhaps I should instal a 200,000.00 stereo system in my 20,000 car with video games and dvd player. Or how about another jew made movie about white people acting HIP and black people acting kosher so we can all just get along? Fuck THEM FUCK THOSE NIGGER JEWS. THEY CAN TAKE ADVANTAGE OF IT, BUT WE CAN'T? We are the poets they are fucking hack rappers and jew studio owners taking advantage of the past. taking advantage of the blood of concentration camp victims and dead slaves, and they can say it? FUCK THAT, so can I. Whenever and however i want, and if you were smart, you would too. they only care about money, cocaine, cars and ho's, and it's out of control. So fuck those niggers and fuck the JEWS that are taking it to the bank for profit. WAKE UP.
Y2kSlamPoet
replying on The Mellifluous Sound of God: Musical Eden by Don-Quixote
28 Aug 2003, 4:08 PM
... do you have a traumatic memory of the 8th grade or something? did the whole school see your tiny dick and laugh at you, take pictures and hang it allover the walls of the campus?
Is that why your obsessed with masturbation, so obsessed that you named yourself after your lover?
Y2kSlamPoet
replying on The Mellifluous Sound of God: Musical Eden by Don-Quixote
28 Aug 2003, 4:06 PM
Man.. im overflowing with envy.. -fart-
Y2kSlamPoet
replying on The Mellifluous Sound of God: Musical Eden by Don-Quixote
28 Aug 2003, 4:05 PM
you really have no ability to detect sarcasm.. and my god, your getting predictable. I dont like voting on my own shit, tsk.. not the kind of thing i do.
Why dont you just stop wasting your time, and discontinue to jump at these cute fish lures of mine..
Why do you continue to comment anyway? i wonder.. is it to educate me? belittle me? simply to anger me perhaps? prove to the whole site that im stupid? (your a good politician)
Might it be a social masturbation of some sort? are you attempting to save me and show me the truth of jesus (god, i hope not)
just.. shhhhh shhh my sweet little child..
Gosh.. i got me a blue zero.. lie2me, i bet your just waiting anonymously, always on the watch for when i will dishonor picasso, or make fun of you.. your sad.. sad woman, you dont have the spine to come out and give me the green zero and add a comment to show everyone your nonexistent intelligence.
I liked this one, it was not 8th grade.
Oh christ, dont be such a shitty diaper.. no spine, no spine i say!
Drug induced mind banter with the unknowable isn't poetry, it's more like, mmmm.., 8th grade! Are you in the gifted classes? Sugar love, ..hmmm.?heh?
8th grade pool parties.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on The Mellifluous Sound of God: Musical Eden by Don-Quixote
28 Aug 2003, 3:42 PM
Then why don't you write a little webpage on your own computer called don-quixotepoemranker which only you get to vote and comment on, rather than posting your self-indulgent twaddle on a PUBLIC POETRY FORUM?
I challenge thee to a duel, mesieur.0
But I'm still put off by the use of the N-word. Don't like it.
Val, I give you a 10 because I see the humor and the wit of this poem!
Margaret
That's because he wasn't a poet, young man. He was a story teller. Read 'William Wilson' or 'the system of Dr. Tarr and professor Fether'. 'Ms. found in a bottle' was a good story too. he wrote a lot tales, not a lot of poetry.
<~>, This was just a poem. It wasn't about Poemranker. I know Val (guess that puts her on a even bigger shit list) and this is just a poem she wrote one day (see c2000).
Are we feeling guilty?
Come on z, 'the most advanced forum for literary camaraderie in the civilized world?' ROFL!
sounds like a toss.
title sucks.. death is a dead subject, it takes a master to give it life, your not fit for the job.. 0
.. if your goal was to capture the mental workings of children, then ok, im not going to step on this.. because you did it well.. the cute innocence and crap..
but cmon, couldnt you insert a "goddamn it" or "shit".. ok, ok, im being picky.. -sigh-
6
"Soother her needless anxieties and
sonstant affronts." i believe there is a typo in here or two.