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richa on I'm Back! by wEdible Underpantsw 26 Aug 2003, 4:34 AM
great, another I'm back/ I'm not like you / even though I write poems/ proud to be a redneckl/ I'm not gay/ look I hate gays/ your gay/ aren't I very post modern/ and ironic/ bla bla bla
an advert disguised as a poem. Bit like swedens eurovision entry which claimed to be a song, when it was an instrumental with some guy talking at the beginning. anyway this 'poem' is sweet as pie and dark. I like it. When you are famous will your name be j handrinos?
richa on no name by ~ska~ 26 Aug 2003, 4:16 AM
too prosaic really, nothing new. I quite like the rhyme of the first three lines, flows well.
Do you really know Rufus Wainwright? I saw him once on "Later with Jools Holland" on BBC 2. Playing "Foolish Love". Quite good.
Nicholas Jones replying on My Back Fat by charlie busted 26 Aug 2003, 3:41 AM
I apologise if that came out a bit strong. I've been having a bad morning.
Nicholas Jones on My Back Fat by charlie busted 26 Aug 2003, 3:34 AM
This is fucking awful. And I hate busted. Especially the tall one. They should be put in a maximum security prison where they will be forced to sleep with the light on every night of their lives.
<~> on blink by VorioBuche 25 Aug 2003, 10:09 PM
nice.
Bill Z Bub on no name by ~ska~ 25 Aug 2003, 9:33 PM
I refuse to worship the god of Job. And I was going to curse at you, but I realized you're probably just a very young silly person. I have issues. Don't mind me.
Bill Z Bub on Laundry Day by impert&ent 25 Aug 2003, 8:57 PM
nice and crisp.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Laundry Day by impert&ent 25 Aug 2003, 7:58 PM
Wishy washy, but fun.
For you, Momma said knock them out.
Good luck dude. Sock it to 'em.
nadine will know where they are. or at least where the other set is. good luck, jeremi. not that you'll need it. wish i could be there. but i have an ex husband to meet, and a condo to sell. ah, life. will it be taped?
<~> on Halves by impert&ent 25 Aug 2003, 7:12 PM
halves severs it. but maybe you meant to? other than that, no beef from me.
<~> on To be discontinued by impert&ent 25 Aug 2003, 7:09 PM
no. i don't buy it.
<~> on Laundry Day by impert&ent 25 Aug 2003, 7:08 PM
superb. thank you.
<~> replying on Addiction leaving by death by LuckyJoe 25 Aug 2003, 6:09 PM
but joe, can't you see that when you say, "Guess my main part with writing is I want to give a message, so I write one given way to make the person see what it is that I want to say"what you are saying is that YOU ARE WRITING FOR OTHERS. let them walk alongside you. feel the cold. the rain. the sun. the breeze. that's got to work so much better than telling them how it is. see?
LuckyJoe replying on Addiction leaving by death by LuckyJoe 25 Aug 2003, 6:03 PM
*smiles* Thanks for the help hun. I'll work on it some when I get home from work. Guess my main part with writing is I want to give a message, so I write one given way to make the person see what it is that I want to say. If I'm going to be writing to entertain others I'm going to have to start writing for them...not for myself. Again I thank you for all the information and help in this battle. Always... lucky
How does that not make sense? Look it up.