poetandknowit
on Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig
1 Aug 2003, 4:39 PM
Painful read. Horrible poem
flouroscope
Well that's a happening piece.
The end could be strengthened and overall I had fun with this piece. 7.
Now that's devotion. 10
Everyone thought that way, because I led them in that direction and people enjoy "like attracts like". Are you aware how deluded you've become in your part time pseudo madness?
hey, don't forget your painted pony and your spinning wheel.
Nothing ground breaking here, but that's pleasant occasionally, normality in simple observations and respect for the natural world around you. 7
Oh, you know me, nothing much... Just a babbling stoned idiot chirping along with conspiracy theorys.
see: http://www.blackbird.vcu.edu/v2n1/poetry
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oh, my! i had never seen this one! and, for the longest time, i did think you were settle. may i still call you settle? you know,for old times sake? <sniff>
envy? no, non, no. i'm not endowed for envy.
had you left your moniker as -=Dark__Angel=-, i would have noted it! and i'm pretty damn sure there were only a handful you didn't fool on that one. nice work, there.
So then everyone around you writes like hardened criminals that may never again get to see light of day?
And I seem to remember a time when everyone thought I was Settle ... see my response at http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
While we're on the subject, I think it was very unfair to give poor old QUENDO the wanker wings for having the widest homepage. That decision was driven by envy, wasn't it?
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
You forget my proudest moment ...
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
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