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Everyone does start small... even after writing years and years its nice to go back to the roots and see if the simplisity (spelling) is still there. Often times its hard to get back to your roots. My first poem I ever wrote was back in 4th grade... short...sweet...simple. Here it is... May we never depart, May the love always stay true. Shall it not stay, Can destiny discover that we were made for each other? May life lead us the right way. Please hold on.
horus8 replying on Deranged Sailor: Sea Sickness [revised] by SupremeDreamer 28 Jul 2003, 6:07 PM
I liked the poem, but don't get melodramatic.
<~> on Octopussed by <{Baba^Yaga}> 28 Jul 2003, 5:31 PM
8, for the legs now floating, dead.
"Yeah, I can tell you're drunk by your slurred typing. But, anyway, I was trying to be judgmental, I just wondered what compelled you to comment in that way so frequently" Since he's drunk... What's your excuse?
DreamerSupreme on Octopussed by <{Baba^Yaga}> 28 Jul 2003, 4:37 PM
want some calamari with that tartar sauce? ;x 8.
DreamerSupreme replying on Cooking Class [Revised] by DreamerSupreme 28 Jul 2003, 4:33 PM
now now, we aint havin fish sticks. :P
Tar tar, 101.
SupremeDreamer replying on Demonic Chef by DreamerSupreme 28 Jul 2003, 3:51 PM
oink. im now a boar with horns. ;)
Aye, home protection kicks ass.. ;) 8.
SupremeDreamer on The plains of Africa by horus8 28 Jul 2003, 3:44 PM
Nice. Discovery channel narrative.. i enjoyed the read. 9.
SupremeDreamer on The Set Back by horus8 28 Jul 2003, 3:37 PM
WAHOO! Heil HORUS! LEAD ME MY GENERAL! ONWARDS ONWARDS, TWARDS THE FUTURE.. i like the pictures though.. ;P 10.
Well.. first you hate me, then you say im the best.. im confused to a point of dizziness.
deep-as-a-puddle on Xmas gifts list by lunar 28 Jul 2003, 3:02 PM
fake, originality is nothing if it dosent come from the heart and this sounds as if you have tried to use metaphors cleaverly instead of speaking what you treuly feel...therefore the poem is to impress rather than to express your emotion? pah what do i know!
deep-as-a-puddle replying on Caged World by deep-as-a-puddle 28 Jul 2003, 2:59 PM
dearest, its about the fact that we are not allowed to live the way we want because someone else has an idea on how it should be done (line 5) religion restricts the things that makes one happy (line 8) someone who dosent want to follow set rules is made to do so (line 10) cripples are constantly persecuted
horus8 on unlucky burglar, unlucky me by cacophony 28 Jul 2003, 2:17 PM
Ha!
cacophony on The Red Light Man by scitz 28 Jul 2003, 1:31 PM
Like it a lot - I agree with Horus8 however "of conscience" seems to muddy the last line. 8
horus8 replying on Deranged Sailor: Sea Sickness [revised] by SupremeDreamer 28 Jul 2003, 1:26 PM
No, why.
horus8 on summer feeling by nolan 28 Jul 2003, 1:17 PM
lol. "but that isn't different that is called being alone" vintage.
you have power.. words. my good friend, have you forgotten the power of the pen? ;P
Hrmm. Whats with the hateful anger good ole pal? And I'm rubbish eh? oh well. i guess i just do what me can. ;)