Dan garcia-Black
on Ode to a Pizza Hut Roach by http://mulberryfairy
27 Jul 2003, 11:49 AM
The Orkin man's Dna will long be gone before "Mamaroach" finishes her crouton.
Don't he know what spraying poisen can do
To him, to us, to me and you?
Silly contract killers.
Dan garcia-Black "Son of Roachmama"
You have an eye for what matters, now can you possibly make these lines sing? Too prosy, too conversational.
Nice
you looking to start a pissing contest? lol. your right, you write better, guess what.. I DONT GIVE A SHIT. btw, enjoy the odor of my feces on your front porch, and the little black/brown roses dropped apon your flowers. call me moses, the shit king.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Jul 2003, 11:16 AM
Since you're Korean maybe you could help. I find that all Koreans look the same to me. And they all talk in the same way and seem to have the same personalities. As far as I can tell they all think the same thoughts, wear the same clothes, eat the same foods and like the same musics. Are they all just the same person? A bit like The Borg in Star Trek?
Incidentally, I once knew a Korean exchange student who went missing for two weeks. It turned out that he had spent the entire fortnight in a 24-hour kareoke bar.
SupremeDreamer
on Poemranker's Recent Infestation of Teenage Girls by 68.75.19.117
27 Jul 2003, 11:05 AM
cmon, who left the damned bar of soap.. ;/
yes it is a sweet poem, the imagery is there and i enjoyed reading it ->9
Bangin' on the belt.
Sorry, I was a little un-sober during my last comment. Not always a good thing. I particularly liked the just above freezing temp. Choosing to keep things "fluid". If only punching grandfather clocks would do the trick, eh?
http://mulberryfairy
replying on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Jul 2003, 9:35 AM
Yeah, I can tell you're drunk by your slurred typing. But, anyway, I was trying to be judgmental, I just wondered what compelled you to comment in that way so frequently, and I haven't read anything else by you, so your poem and that comment were my only frames of reference. I did consider writing "I hope you're Korean" but I didn't want to set you up to be even more defensive if you weren't Korean. But, who cares, you don't have to resolve it peacefully ... I don't know you, I really just was curious because I've known several different regions of racists (Southern, Midwestern, Northeastern US and my German grandmother), and kind of wondered if you were part of that or if it was something else. I totally got that your other poem was about stereotypes, but when you ended it with wiggers, chiggers, niggers, etc. you added judgment to your observations, instead of just letting the stereotypes be stereotypes.
I know you thought I was lecturing you, but I didn't mean to, I just wanted you to be aware of how you were coming across. I know we all have hang-ups-
I know I am sexist and racist and allow myself to reap the benefits of white privilege, so how could I judge you?
Of course graveyards are a waste.
I am dealing with someones death and the decision they made to erect an expensive marker.
It seems like such a waste to me. Throw my ashes into the stream and hopefully they will nourish new life
somewhere downstream.
gothtothemaxxxx
Hmm i find if ur happy u tend not to write that well - only tortured writings make good works?! i was on the top 10 once... oh happy days.
babe i cant belive u got dumped! what a stupid reason as well....hmm better picture this time tho! (u seem to have interesting red hair?!)
EMINEM!! god pink bunny i go away for 10 days and youve written god knows how many poems now i have to READ them all!! actually ill check out ur new pic first - see if ur as fit as u say u are. (o;
that's great
seriously
it is