Bachus
replying on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
23 Jul 2003, 12:29 AM
to the max.
what is lolttm? lol
Top twenty poems
poem style avg # authormissing timeFree verse 7.14 49Bill Z. BubBlue Sky Diner, Thursday NightFree verse 7.00 30<~>Gamma Ray MachineFree verse 6.97 40god'swifefixin' - a tale of woeFree verse 6.93 14hipster flareFalling AsleepLyric 6.88 14MiggyExtra Strength TylenolFree verse 6.86 35DurtKLInstructions to a SculptorFree verse 6.86 83ChristofBread & OrangesFree verse 6.84 37god'swifeI am the gayestOde 6.83 9-=Dark__Angel=-The BloodingFree verse 6.79 71Mr PigThe Wooden Armchair Of Similar DreamsFree verse 6.78 14CaducusThe Order Of ThingsFree verse 6.77 30Mr Pigi will not come to bangladeshFree verse 6.75 23lost in americaSome ThingsFree verse 6.75 10ChristofFamily PortraitFree verse 6.75 18Mr PigGoodbyeFree verse 6.75 18Sunshine ConkeyWatching My Childhood VanishFree verse 6.74 13CaducusDamaged By 'Weakness'Other 6.74 22Mr PigThe Last Words She SaidFree verse 6.73 56CaducusThe GentlemanFree verse 6.68 57-=Dark_Angel=-
And then some.
"The pedals of love" Best line ever! What a bike! Dark Bagel once said to me "You must be one of those uncompromising street poetes" You can have that title now. lol. I'm done with it. When i was in prison there was the guard that would wake us up in the middle of the night like it was an emergency... Then he would laugh and start flexing like a boddy building WWF steroid monkey. We called him the python man. What a waste of mashed potatos that bastard was. I never got any sleep.
lolttm! Indeed.
Sometimes, in life, you got to miss the boat, and walk. Worthy, or not. See, what's funny is my 'worthy' poems were zero'd to death, because, if you write a great poem on this sight people will avoid it or kill it anyway. Right, a shit poem about being gay, and tada, number 1. My best work was not apparently worthy either, so you tell me? What's worthy on poemranker Mr. Life raft? i've written a poem about everything except what is and what isn't worthy. ThaT'S IT! I'll write a poem about James Worthy.
ah...fucking zero giving haters dolling out 0s out of spite
my own 'poem' was hit up with blue zeros
oh well
i dont' care
it wasn't even a poem
it was a house
:(
That's damn funny.
Not worthy of you...
Yeah, me too, they need to be extinguished.
The poet? Never, full of caviar maybe and themselves.
A superior piece.
"diffcult" typo, and there are some gramatical errors. "she pasted away" this made me grin naturally. I'd fix that if I were you, but the sentiment felt honest and pure enough. 6.
Decent, and powerful.
Bountiful yet lean.
"Crossed arms, standing over the hallway
The angel cries, all it has tried
to make me see..To save me,
Failed".
Yes, very good. Find your subjects and explore them intigrating yourself, so it becomes organic and not self absorbed. I would suggest strengthening your vocabulary and grammar next, but you got the right idea. writing every day on poemranker will teach you that. 7.
All very informative, true and lovely points.
it bored me. ;/ 7.