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horus8 replying on Yellow Star by Mr Pig 22 Jul 2003, 8:16 PM
i thought my poem a pig and jew on island was hilarious did you read that? Good god,I put some shit in there that had me shaking my head while writing it. It's brilliant, read it again. I even take a cheapshot on the dark one in it. Debating good... Agreeing bad... by the way, I hope you'er not tired, because I was writing left handed while debating you. My right hand is teaching my son had to read. i'm so happy, i got him into one of the best K-5 schools in Southern California. 800.00 a month but it's worth it. And he's only three going on four. I'm so very proud of him, and glad had the time to home school him for this last year. He's a beautiful wiz. My boy, my baby boy's going to school. I'm so excited.
horus8 replying on Yellow Star by Mr Pig 22 Jul 2003, 7:58 PM
Thank you, what a lovely thing to say.
DreamerSupreme replying on Yellow Star by Mr Pig 22 Jul 2003, 7:51 PM
i wish you write a book about this.. addiction to words is my disease, your writing makes me a crack whore needing a fix.
SupremeDreamer on null by Bill Z Bub 22 Jul 2003, 7:12 PM
i feel small.. ;/ 10.
SupremeDreamer on I am the gayest by walrus8 22 Jul 2003, 7:09 PM
Well damn... your no longer in denial.. 10. ;)
http://mulberryfairy on Halves by impert&ent 22 Jul 2003, 7:08 PM
beautiful. Nice juxtaposition of the coming and going at the end.
http://mulberryfairy on Middleman by INTRANSIT 22 Jul 2003, 6:59 PM
Reminds me of Phish at Limestone, Maine. I like the ending.
http://mulberryfairy on Truckin' by INTRANSIT 22 Jul 2003, 6:57 PM
What's a bullrack?
Nice. Don't forget the politician and the actor.
Bill Z Bub replying on null by Bill Z Bub 22 Jul 2003, 6:44 PM
Because writing it gave me a big fat zit on my forehead?
Bill Z Bub replying on null by Bill Z Bub 22 Jul 2003, 6:43 PM
Does it matter? As it reads, would you say it was July's sister? ### The names have been changed to protect the innocent and/or guilty.
http://mulberryfairy replying on Coffle by Wulf 22 Jul 2003, 6:17 PM
That wouldn't be funny even if you were smart enough to spell diarrhea correctly.
Well, I'd wondered what "Pimple" poems had in common.
Thanks for the feedback, I don't think many people have the attention span for a "poem" this long. What is this about "pray to penis for rent"? Didn't you read I'm a social worker?
http://mulberryfairy replying on Performer by http://mulberryfairy 22 Jul 2003, 5:57 PM
Well, this particular poem happens to be part of a set of non-fiction memoirs of poetic moments that I've witnessed w/ my daughter, so it's hard to imagine it any other way.
Harsh, but delicious ... sorry, I'm actually just hungry.
You almost had me until temp'ry ... nice try, doesn't work. At first I thought you were going for a sonnet and I think you should try to take it there.
http://findingwater on Anouk by daniella 22 Jul 2003, 5:18 PM
This is rather lovely.
horus8 replying on Yellow Star by Mr Pig 22 Jul 2003, 4:40 PM
I am your friend never forget that. What we did here was communicate our beliefs and that's a damn healthy thing.
Druid_Girl_1984 on missing time by Bill Z Bub 22 Jul 2003, 3:37 PM
ohh pretty. i like it. = )