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on First Confirmation by babyBOOMER
12 Jul 2003, 7:11 AM
Combat fatigue. Nice that you have a place/method to release some of those painful memories, and that you seem to be able to see what happened clearly.
A beautifully written piece of work.
ah, yes, beautifull.. flows to my soul.. 10. ;)
Very mellow read, i enjoyed it alot. blessed with nine.
Hrmm.. I wasn't aware that we had 12 year olds posting stuff here.... blessed with a three.
It tickled my poetic thought process. ;] blessed with 8.
One of the best poems I've read, today. 10! Funny & dramtic and that's not always easy to do. Welcome to poemranker, now I must go pray to penis for rent, Adieu.
Yes!
lol.
Children are such inspirations for writing. This reminds me of Rita Dove's poem about nursing her daughter. What a gift for your child when she's (?) old enough to appreciate it.
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replying on I am talented & good looking damnit! by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 Jul 2003, 8:39 PM
It is.
Sounds like an affair poem to me. For once, just (don't) break wind.
It's raining in Baltimore, so I'll dance in the rain if you'll watch the sun rise. Watch out for pupil scarring. This would make a good song.
I thought it was spelled dammit. You learn something new every day. Nice refrain there in the middle.
Nice Haiku.
Also, quite amusing.
I liked it.
Who exactly is this joker? DA? this was a clever twist, but i couldnt laugh since your talking about pedophilia here.. it disgusts me. heres a 7, atleast it isnt the same homophobic ranting, but that wasnt no where near the sicklyness of this shit.
Muahahaha. Funny little story, i liked it alot. ;P 10.
what do u mean by that