DreamerSupreme
replying on Dictionary Magic Test Results (DMTR) by DreamerSupreme
11 Jul 2003, 5:36 PM
fluffy and rabbit?... nah, first off, bunny and rabbit are two words refering to the same animal, and fluffy is really pointless since rabbits are sposed to be fluffy. lol. Main words that i will concentrate on are PINK RABBIT/BUNNY and DOOM. since those are the main characteristics of your name that have the highest importance. Unless you disagree ofcourse, but i advise you not to argue this with me ;P
What the hell? you giving me zeros on all my work now museheart? go screw yourself you fucking little piece of shit, i dont need some wanna-be pompously scoring my work as if they were in ANY position to judge my poems. You really must be a fool, because your digging your grave deeper than the usual six feet. jesus christ, DA has a thousand times more right to give me zeros, since he can actually call himself a poet... pompous poets is one thing, but a wanna-be? pfft.
I know it needs work. Just getting it out and down and giving it some time for now. An eight is a lot more than I expected.
At......?
lol.
Please get out of my window display. If you think I'm too fucking gay. lol
TIMMY!ah ti ti ti timmMY!TIMAHY!
horus8
on OK, I apologize - it's steaming shite and no mistake, but it was the best I could come up with on the spur of the moment. I'm off to slit my wrists now, since writer's block has sent me spiralling into the depths of the deepest depression in human history... by Yardbird
11 Jul 2003, 11:59 AM
Chilling.
Perhaps, he was a king to you, but a Saint to me.
No I am blunt, like a hole cake.
Anything. but mediocre. It's ah... Bland.
OnTheOtherHand
replying on How To Make Up Without Saying I'm Sorry by OnTheOtherHand
11 Jul 2003, 9:43 AM
Nah he was just a whiner living with a passive-aggressive BPD sufferer. We actually got along great because he could take these occasional out bursts as long as I followed them up with periods of guilt induced niceties.
Thanks for the Nine though.
It was much better before you changed the spellings.
thepinkbunnyofdoom
on How To Make Up Without Saying I'm Sorry by OnTheOtherHand
11 Jul 2003, 9:36 AM
I think pissing you off was his point. He lives for it. Good Vilanelle by the way. -9-
Touching, but lacks enough expression of rage and anger to go with all the broken things. -8-
P.S. Frasor Allonby, your former cellmate says next time you say he forced you to eat your own shit, He'll make you eat his as well.
And you gave it a 4? So I take it shit eating gets a 5?
Far be it from me to look down upon a scatophile.
Mediocre. As usual.
I like this poem slightly less than I like being forced to eat my own shit by my psychotic cell-mate
You are su-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-ch a c-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-nt
Very