SupremeDreamer
on Pilgrimage by Christof
23 Jun 2003, 7:59 AM
interesting, good imagery. ill bless thee with a -7-
he mentioned it and i checked it on webster.. webster didnt mind found it to be correct.. so it doesnt matter anyway. Im not american or british or a turkish monk in brown robes, and your pathetically just waiting and drooling for any opportunity to poke fun.. well, speak all you wish, after this comment i heed nothing of your foul cunt mouth. your politely, or "immaturedly" ignored Madam..
Yet again you fail. "faeces" is a chiefly British variant of "feces". Whilst I, like all Gentlemen, prefer "faeces", I do believe you are American... ?
thanks for mentioning the typo.
see what happens when people piss me off? ;D
go supreme dreamer, but typo of 'feces', should be faeces
A sunclap, hmmmm it's not every day an original word of this nature works well, and it did. i think a lot about fusing words because well when you can't spell for shit or punctuate, you better fuse words better than most or pray you can get by with borrowed & rearranged titles, because being able to make highly symbolic and triple edged hybrids like "sunclap" is as important of a tool in a poets chest, as listening is to an actor. Take a nine and <chicky chicky chew> Will can tame a shrew.
And God said let it rain 10s.
It's fear of clowns.
Not bad, and simple, to the point, and as refreshing as waking up naked in the zoo.
No, i dont. Btw, can we communicate in some other means, perhaps the site chat or irc.. or do you have a suggestion?
Mr Baba Horus Yaga, do you know that has really touched me. You know I've always thought that you're a kick-ass poet sometimes lacking in discipline, and sometimes I don't get your stuff, but I also know that you're not heartless, that you feel it and do it for real, that you're always trying to make something new and fack me if that's not what poetry needs. I know creation is your life and you've got the guts to live it on your own terms and I understand your frustration with people who think it's a hobby. Well, the best of all bastard luck to you, especially of you're going to try the sestina, 'cos that's the kind of mutant freakoid form that scares me right off. It really means something to me that you appreciate what I've done, mainly because, hell, I know you don't give praise lightly, and also because I think you've put your finger o what I'm trying to do. All power to your elbow, my man. Now enough of this mutual hugging, it'll make us sappy and moist. Go well, old boy.
SupremeDreamer
replying on A Gordian knot (Some dirt on a friend of mine) by Bachus
23 Jun 2003, 6:25 AM
... im not sure if this was a joke, coincidence or if your just playing with me. any and either way, i doubt your going to make things easy.
Do you know the story of the original Gordian knot and Alexander the great?
Here, here.
No, but I can see my coffee maker, and that's about as metaphorical as it gets right now.
Im very aware of why Donning an assmask was written.. the knot piece though is what really struck the dong in my magic mind and drove me to find a needle poking at my head tauntingly...
Your stance here? Amazing, simply finger gag me to death regalishly amazing. You my friend have just overdosed on plaid and wool socks. Because I can feel it, your absolute indifference to you pretending you're absolutely indifferent through sheer fact verses fiction being in what you positively know to be your total and complete control. I wonder who's more emotionally obliterated me, you, or Supremely head in the clouds? Not that it makes a widdled coaster of a difference anymore since I've been inducted into the "Stall of none came" I can die knowing i was better at being a booty than a sock on the foot of a Leper named Afrony Oopsthatsmyear. i've led a privalidged millenium, how you feeling? Your metaphysical mask bit, spurned me to write Donning an Ass-Mask, is it safe. A retrospective of better times to be, enjoy the day aye.
Im.. not exactly sure how to answer as certain things mentioned act like a fucking mirror.. but this wont scare me, it only drives me insane into a task of getting to know you, wondering if perhaps that will be permitted..
You speak of seeing the future.. You speak of a boy that looks at a room and breaks it down into code (striking me with shock as i remember childhood memories) you strike at the core of my own name sir, suprisingly.. Now i understand.. yes, i do, for as i was signing up for this i had dejavu, i now remember the flash i had.. well man, with your potions you see into the void of what will be, but i wonder if you can see the whirlpools of time, chaos storms that have no cut clear result as to a persons fate.
I see without magic potions (hope i didnt take a metaphore too seriously)
I have only recently awakened from the chains of my soul and mind.. now i wonder what exactly you have in the name of dream to present to this mystics table..
Ding ding! lol.