WtfAsl.

The sad fact is they give track of the day shit to any sucker that comes along. And I haven't left my front room in three years. My tour bus is a super man lunch box with pringle's tupperware and a plaid thermos, and I'm also the drummer, guitarist, rodie, manager, bass player, and grilled cheese maker. Life is dire, oh well. Cheerio. Do you think if we finally drive someone to suicide they'll award us or make a movie about us and our dominion?

What did you think of stanza three by the way?

I think you'e a pissed off fourty two year old plumber with three nipples and a large alcohol tolerance, that sometimes enjoys miniture golf and lazy nights walking for hours, alone.

1. If you want to see what others have to say about it, why do you throw a temper tantrum every time they tell you, and say "I don't care what you think about my work"? 2. God, you are such a broken record. Will you please just shut up about "judging" this and "judging" that? I swear you never make a post without whining about people judging you. Just today you were giving horus8 all this stuff about how he has no life, blah blah blah. And look: Now you're crying and complaining about being judged yourself. You silly little shit. All you do is march up and down, judging your own life to be good and judging everyone else who disagrees to be bad because they're judging you. All teenagers ever do is approve of things and disapprove of things. It's uninteresting and stupid. This is a site about poetry. horus8 is criticising your poetry. Because you are a whiny teenager, you find it impossible to stay on topic and you invariably try to skew the discussion into some bullshit about JUDGING. If you have something to say about your poetry, say it. Other than "stop judging my poetry", of course. Otherwise, please just stop talking, because everyone has heard what you have to say and you haven't said anything new since you joined the site. Besides, if your life was such a paradigm of teenage perfection, I doubt you'd be such a whiny little shit.

1. I post my "work" because i want to see what others have to say about it. I'm not forcing you to read it, so i dont know why you complain, just simply ignore it. 2. I haven't been living for a long time, but my life is as rewarding as it possibly can be at my age. And you don't have any clue who i really am and what my life is, so you have no right to judge either, because you DONT know me, at all

1. Why do you constantly post your "work" here if you don't want it to be "judged"? Nobody enjoys reading it. 2. As a 14-year-old, you have no idea what constitutes a rewarding life. Oh what, you've got a girlfriend and you stare into each other's eyes and write love poems and sometimes she shows you her tits? Wow! That's more rewarding than I can possibly imagine!

I have an idea, post another one, this parodying stuff is fun.

If you indeed write for yourself, you're doing yourself a severe disservice, only a fool would put his name on those pitiful verses.

I don't write for you or anyone else, i write for myself. Do you honestly think i care if you think my songs suck? No i dont, just like im sure you dont care that i think your songs suck. I don't own a guitar, but i play the drums, and am quite good at them too. That's not even the fucking point, the point is i dont really care if you think i write shit for songs. It amazes me that you actually think i give a crap whether or not you, of all people, like my songs. Who are you to judge someone else's work? You're just Bachus, just like I'm John K. You think you're that much better than me because you are a "freelance writer, actor, father, frontman, and published poet," and I'm just a student at some high school in New York? Well, you're not better than me, just like im not better than you. So you're right, you wanted to piss me off with this song, and you did, congratulations. And thank you for not lying to me, i appreciate it, but i dont know what difference it makes. Maybe your life is very rewarding, and it sounds like it is and your happy with it, but i dont care. But just like you dont care about what ive gotta say, i dont give a shit either. So have a nice day, and a nice life, because ive got better shit to do. I have a life too you know, and its ALSO more rewarding than YOU can imagine

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