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Bachus replying on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 5:14 PM
Caves full.
Bachus replying on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 5:13 PM
Master, I meant to be rid of all the enbrowned attire lying about before crossing paths with you again, I do appologize, please forgive me. I had planned on surprising you later with lilac wine and tarts in the gazeebo.
Dangzter replying on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 4:38 PM
Geez horus, how many things to you have to say to the lord?
horus8 on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:21 PM
I want a phone call.
horus8 on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:19 PM
IT WASN'T MY FAULT! THE VOICES! I THOUGHT IT WAS YOU! But since you don't have any lips and resemble more of an ff pink amoeba I know now I was wrong, forgive me God *Bang* *BANG*
horus8 on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:17 PM
That was fun. Whatta I owe ya?
horus8 on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:15 PM
YOU?! It can't BE!
horus8 on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:05 PM
"TAKE COVER JESU!!!! WHEN I DIED THEY WERE RIGHT ON MY TAIL!" <From the scratchings of Saint Germaine 'the charismaticly uncommited' in the book of 'robe' chapter 'terry cloth' footnoot "why my sloth has three toes".>
horus8 on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:00 PM
Excuse me Lord, but that's my foot.
horus8 on Sittin Here by psikosis 15 Jun 2003, 1:58 PM
I concure with Richa. It's too loose.
horus8 replying on Janine (a set of haikus) by capachijim 15 Jun 2003, 1:56 PM
Noun or verb instead of "one".
horus8 on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 1:52 PM
Lord, don't let me in. Save yourself from the onslaught of homosexuals, niggers, chinks, and Jews that would inturn ensue. Think of the integrity of heaven Lord. I believe, Lord, I must decline because I love you and the others to much to risk the impurity.
horus8 on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 1:06 PM
Pass the liver Lord.
Dangzter replying on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 12:34 PM
yea
INTRANSIT on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 12:33 PM
I say this: Hey bud, let's party!!!!!
horus8 on New school nursery rhymes by DeadtotheWorld 15 Jun 2003, 12:31 PM
Shat, shate, and shating make reading any poor poets poem worth it, but the rest of your work here is shat, and particularly general and unimaginative. Perhaps if you would have fucked Dina with a dwarf's gnarled caloused fist holding a square bowling ball? Or turned the spider into Carl Jung's left testicle carrying a rose in it's teeth, maybe if you added the noise of an airplane flying overhead, or a loudspeaker ending a factory's break, I might of felt more connected?
INTRANSIT replying on Pendulum swing lines by INTRANSIT 15 Jun 2003, 12:29 PM
or is it fluttering, like toilet paper grabbing for it's last rim of hope?
INTRANSIT replying on Pendulum swing lines by INTRANSIT 15 Jun 2003, 12:22 PM
normally,yes. this was intentional. Danka.
INTRANSIT replying on Pendulum swing lines by INTRANSIT 15 Jun 2003, 12:21 PM
you're gonna make me work, aren't you?