horus8
replying on Seven by Dangzter
16 Jun 2003, 1:53 PM
If that's how you behave when under the influence. I suspect you'd be better equipped sober.
The only thing you have in life is an ace homepage. The rest you stole from kids on the short bus.
I liked it up until my left hand turned into a radioactive porta potty and regurgitated blue curdled turds about my work space.
That, and feces.
When I was halfway through reading your poeme I thought to myself 'I bet the last line of this poeme is "I'm sorry"'.
Prostitution certainly is an important issue.
I too have frequently delivered myself of the opinion that the satin walls of purposeful isolation have tasted betrayal and, much like the vengeful Sun, have succumbed to the raindrops of concrete complexion. Nevertheless, one cannot but wonder from time to time that perhaps one's opinions, though artfully decorated in the plush velveteen plumes of purposeless consolidation, make about as much sense to non-spastics as the senseless ramblings of a half-baked nincompoop with some heavy shopping. Halos were never meant to rust, my friend. Never meant to rust...
Your right it is. I actually laughed out loud reading this. In fact I'd just like to take the time to say
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Okay, nope not yet
Hahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahah
Hey, sup man, its a bit smoky in here. You gonna pass that joint or what?
Something like that. It's about transcendence. See if you can spot the intertextual references.
I think I agree, I'm not really happy with the ending. In fact the whole thing is a work in progress. The best line is the first one, and I borrowed that from Gerard Manley Hopkins. It came into my head, and I thought I'd written it, but then I remembered it came from somewhere else. But then I used it anyway; it seemed to make sense.
That would depend on the size and type of bird and the size of the cage.
put away the thesaurus
are you 11 years old or some sort of super genius writing to fuck with the minds of the inferior?
I liked it until i got past halfway.
Made my ears pop.
How do I buy these three?
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