-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on Glassblowers by Christof
17 Jun 2003, 7:32 AM
I nearly took a fork to my eye after I read "Paid to spend their lungs in glass".
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
CONSTRUCTIVE
WHAT YOU'RE DOING IS "NON-CONSTRUCTIVE PRAISING". IT IS 10 TIMES WORSE THAN NON-CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM BECAUSE IT JUST ENCOURAGES PEOPLE TO WRITE MORE WITHOUT IMPROVING.
You mean not every one collects those?
Maybe not, unless you would purposely rack sack your haikus to rid the scent of us mad hounds and anny up on your poetic prose. Ah, who cares, you're a damn good poet regardless of who you are, or maybe not, maybe because of who you are. Listen children, I've had an epiphany, live life to the fullist, taste the good and the bad to know the difference, be a jack of all trades.
You make me laugh. You are Mr. Pig, aren't you.
Very funny ^_^
Wow, that was really nice...
I don't own one :-D
at least a.s.bs. are disposable.
Nope Dying is just a major buzz kill.
woooooooooooooo...
thats the werewolf
I keep going back and just cackling like a hyenna! I will take this up the charts myself than.
Again, you amaze me, incredible awareness here, really.
Ha! cheers!
Jesus, that hurt.
Snooze button blues. Your symbolism in this piece is definitely beta realm sleep depravation.
razorgrin
on To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
16 Jun 2003, 2:52 PM
I want this on billboards, t-shirts and tattooed backward on the foreheads of all aspiring poetes. Beautiful.
Good god have a Platinum Q-tip awarde, that was simply the best.
This children is Christof, he is poet, where and when you newbies are not, reap it!
This poem, by the way Christ (if I may use diminutives) is just splendid, have an 8, i actually think it deserves a nine, but since you are an exceptional poet. I can't honestly read all of your poems and give them what they deserve, because then, I believe, I would just be knocking myself out of the top fifteen, and since everyone hates me, it would be impossible to recover my standings, forgive me oh dead composer.