Bill Z Bub
on Iterated Fuck by nentwined
4 Jun 2003, 4:44 PM
a breath of fresh air. No wait, it smells like FUCKING in here you perverted little weasel! 9.9
<wimper> i was in an harness. <sniff> and, his penis is truly 3000 miles long. <blurt> HOW WAS I TO SEE IT COMING, CLEAR ACROSS THE ROCKIES? THE PURPLE MOUNTAINS MAJESTY, THE AMBER FIELDS OF GRAIN???
DAMN YOU!!! DAMN YOU FOR EXPOSING MY SHAME!!!
grima wormtunnel. that's who you are. vest or no, there is truly poison in your ear.
How do you know? Make your eyes look at this:
First, 'exit' seems clearly to refer to the anus. The vagina is almost never described as an exit except during childbirth, while the anus just is an exit. Second, that that the 'exit' is clean is worth mentioning indicates that it would normally or otherwise be unclean, which is obviously more true of the anus. Third, that he mentions being careful indicates the increased likelihood of injury during anal sex. Fourth, the anus is more likely to 'quiver', given that it is a sphincter. Fifth, whatever foul meaning 'tunnel of worm' has, for reasons pinkbunnyofdoom has mentioned it seems more likely to be about the anus. What possible meaning could it have of any other kind fo sex?
Sixth, think of the logistics. If "hands are breast-kneading, waist-grasping, clit-feeding", then surely he is taking the MYSTERY SEX PARTICIPANT from behind. Finally, although this is highly conjectural, I believe "straining to transport more air for explosions" refers to a bizarre sex practice of nentwined whereby his anally-obtained climax is heightened by the penetratee farting on his love-truncheone at the critical moment. This would also explain "lightheaded and dizzy", as one is apt to become so after a particularly powerful farte.
How is it, then, that the passage refers to non-anal sex?
ARE YOU, <~>, HAVING THE SEX WITH NENTWINED?!?!!!111/1/?
I think this could be quite a good poeme if you made it better.
"Itâs patched and dented", "It's frozen claws": Its
"With in" (both times): Within
"Chilling my frightened blood/Even more": Show, don't tell.
~squeeeeeeeeeek~
Parghhhhhhh
urnmphhhhhh
Mahrgggg
Whoumphhhhh.
Grrrrrrrunmph
plop.
Dude, this poem should be torn appart and shot at you through a straw.
"The plug shaped yellow face" lol.
Yes, and no. That horribly desperate.
Oh...Yeah huh.
About as erotic as watching a guerilla witha phd trunk rape a minivan.
Buggery, how would he have been lost?
Wait, you still have a son? I thought maybe he'd been lost in the confusion surrounding the Philp symour Hoffemane... 'unpleasantness'.
Which is the primary source of your income, the buggery for money or the hard-hitting street poetry?
Buggery, how would he have been lost?
"a lot of those people are the same person, and vote and
comment on their own poems because theyâre that bad."
You're right. I... I... I don't know what to say. How can I ever be redeemed!? I must proceed at once to strap myself into Mr Chetwoad's Flagellating Contraption to atone for my sins.
That was the worst, really, you should hairdryer your pecker in a toilet (if you can reach the water, that is) immediately.
The best.
"deliberate hair" Good lord, help us from this poetic tyrant and his random noticing of deliberating hair.
Another must read.
No. You had it on repeat.