thepinkbunnyofdoom
on Over and Gone by Miggy
27 May 2003, 1:07 PM
I've been there before and it sux AWARDE. -10-
Great writing this, If you ever record it as a song let me know.
Even so that makes the discovery, funny that it took her that long figure it out.
Ah, but if you'd've read your mythology you'd know what happened to the last crew that tried to turn me into fish food wouldn't you love muffin.
ah Bachus,seems you have me confused with another contortionist...the last time my ankels were introduced to my earlobes was in the womb...by the way..no one has been this graphic with me in over 25 years....and he saw my satanic eyes just before he became fish food.
Ha! Unless she's a fat cow dike with a glass eye.
Sweetly and intensely deep and meaningful. -9-
No, it can't. three hundred to 500 years ago yes, but now... No. Try instead plastic posies... Now that's true love, roses, are way outdated, and all ready done a million ways better in poems you two still have yet to read, and never could come remotely close to writing nearly as well.
Ouch! thats so brilliant, It makes my head hurt. Discovery of a Simple Truth. -10-
I'm sorry, what was that? I was just counting the dead bugs on my window. Did your mouth move?
"He came in the winter of my soul" Yes! he came all over it. "Then when my petals regained vibrant blush
He stood back and smiled, and heaved a deep sigh". Baby, I would slurp on that tight little vulva of yours until you projectile orgasmed all over my dual face, and baby, I would gargle that hot steaming piss and go back for round 'the two'. I would introduce your ankles to your earlobes while my toes did the comforter dig/crawl. I would have my thumb prying in your hot sweet mouth while the other hand clenched head hair then I'd vibrate like an epileptic don juan until your eyeballs went satanic.
Perhaps you need more Kale in your diet albineato.
No, but I might toot.
You want to see timing.Check out the inside of my brain.
http://www.paradiselost.com/index.php?mo
Why are there so many people called 'horus8'? I thought it was just some meaningless thing you made up. I think there's something you're not telling us, Mr. Handrinos.
I don't recall asking you to teach me how to shrink heads dr. Besides, imagination is impossible to teach to people that mow their lawn wearing hush puppies and zinca on their noses. By the way God's dead haven't the Jews that run the head shrinking pill popping industry explained that to you yet?
Nice the bottom two lines first stanza don't really fit into the structure.
You have used obvious rhyme but resisted using obvious in between the rhymes
I have an idea, enroll in advanced creative writing course as most driven writers would, and shut the fuck up. Did it ever occut to you that 'poets' write poetry not hold the hands of the hopelessly unimaginative, because, if we did on this sight that would leave us with zero time to work on our material?
lots of imagery
If i have one criticism it is the careless use of words such as demonic.
I need luring in a bit more