baughworm
on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america
20 May 2003, 9:37 PM
beautifully written
very young sounding
heading towards something great
That is terrible, but then again...6
dont read my shit anymore if you can't say anything intelligent
I think it should be Am I reserved....Not bad though (7)
yeah?
Thanks. Can you play "Don't Stop Believin'"? :D
Yes. (?)
Don't wow my fucking poetry man, go wow your own. Because I can't appreciate it since everything I've read of yours is obviously some sort of trendy inside joke that I have no respect for, since, you have no respect for poetry. If you did, you'd write poetry and not nonsense. Unless you are looking for help, then ask, if not, go fuck scoria and scorpion holes. Thanks! wow!
Don't you ever get sick of being an idiot, really. Because, you are, John. you're a fucking let down to yourself, your family, and jesus, now, go fuck a chunk of pumice.
wow
Is "the lord above" in everything you write? And if that line must be there, can you find nothing else to rhyme it with than love. I'm sorry, I usually try to give the benefit of the doubt but these are too insipid and predictable. They look like something I would have written when I was 10.
God, you are a charmer.
For half a second I thought the first line was clever. But then I was sucked into a black hole of insipidness. 0
Dude I'll have you know I am to Billy Crudup what modeling is to dark angel. lol. here's at-ten-tion.
Bitter Beakfast (Free verse) by D.H.Lawrence
hornless squid-beak
now putrid
after I left
after you left
after we left
it stuffed behind the sofa on a hot, hot day
and I in pyjamas for the heat.
and the flies settled on it
and cleared away the evidence of what we had (done)
but not before there were words
and back rubs
taking place on top of it
like some sort of revolting omelette topping
matted with gravy
and weighted egglingtons.
Thank you, how embarressing on my part. Did you like it Shardik?