Ranger
replying on The consistency of frailty by INTRANSIT
18 May 2003, 11:51 AM
I believe that the true point is just where the pen meets the paper, but I could be wrong.
Yeah I suppose it does need editing, but I actually really like the way this one's going! 7
It does seem a bit too loose in places, and 'I was very angry with God' doesn't really do credit to your ability. Even so it's an enjoyable read, and nice to see people trying something a bit more traditional/ classical (and succeeding!) 9
Yep.
Dear Poetsettle,
What exactly, is the point of poetry?
As I have yet to find a point to anything.
INTRANSIT
Thank you for copyediting.
I'm confused. Why write a short for Poemranker critique? I do identify with it, though.
OOOOOK!
Aptly put! And it rhymes, too. Right on!
'Tis true.
I remember it well. Thanx for writing!
Sad memories...
Now, this one made me think!
Right on! I enjoyed this profound explanation of the "pimple poem."
Oh! Aptly expressed.
Lovely sentiment
Hey, whats with stealin' my goldfish mojo, man?
Works for me.
gotta run around the poemranker store and play kechup.
How did this get missed?