Bobjim
replying on Wanking by Bobjim
9 Apr 2003, 1:31 PM
We are Bobjim, and Bobjim is us.
Resistance is futile. You will be assimilated.
you cock knocking fag! i give you a 3 for soiling my pants.
You're a simpleton with a speech impediment and a English Teacher fetish. You're gay and you're wrong for loving teachers as much as you do. I'll tell you what you should do: go to a bar. get drunk, ask someone to take you home, demand sex and don't even mention your English teacher. Don't even think to use him as a condom as I'm sure you would. I don't care how soft the teacher is, Scientists work better. I give you a 2 for your psycho-sexual condition.
it's a near-rhyme. why don't you go to a site for assholes, since you know so much about that condition, and nothing about that of being a poet?
lumpy doesnt rhyme with comfy. and you're a simpleton with a speech impediment and a sock fetish. you're gay and you're wrong for loving socks as much as you do. i'll tell you what you should do: go to a bar. get drunk. ask someone to take you home. demand sex and don't even mention your socks. dont even think to use them as a condom as i'm sure you would. i dont care how soft the tube sock is, latex works better. i give you a 2 for your psycho-sexual condition.
no, it's plagiarized.
i give you a 10 for plagiarizing someone elses bad spelling. chump.
no. you can get one for being a fuckwad too.
i give you a 4 on the dismount.
the chiefs sucked so bad that they inspired you to write a poem about it? that's pretty bad, you pansy-ass-haiku lovin-kansas city chiefs hatin chump. i'll give you a 1 for writing your name.
less-than-silent lucidity. you just can't be stopped.
got an mp3 of this one yet?
I just asked because its obvious u spend alot of time on this site! (its a decent site i would too if i had the time!) im at college with about half the people on this site -devosky (cannot spell it!), t'ien, bobjim, MuDeNve, ranger, blade, cleverdevice, yardbird etc! thats how i know about this site - i never thought i could write poetry until this site and its made me see some of my friends in a really different light coz ppl write things on here theyd never say! Ive noticed there are not very many females though and everyone seems to be gay!oh well i guess what poetry does to you x
bx--it's too bad you don't care. you express thoughts that so many are feeling, but you don't care enough about saying it to communicate it well. if you want some recognition, run spell check. it shows no respect for yourself or your audience to be so sloppy.
Witty.
Before I found this site I was just writing poems and drawing in class. I started writing as a way to express my anger(and clear my head of all my problems) and slowly found my way to move beyond just writing whenever I was pist. The first poem I ever wrote was mom and dad and that started off as Just a song I'd play when my parents pist me off. Then I got into writing Lyrics and got a band together. My friend Lindsey asked to see what I was writing one day in class and she loved what she read. She said I should try and get published but I realised that I'm not that skilled yet. So one day after a really bad break up I decided that it was time to start sharing my poems and I looked on a search engine for a site where I could submit poetry. I found this one and its free and I liked the Idea of ratings and Letting other people post comments about what you write so here I am. Other than Playing guitar, having fun being moronic and writing poems, I also Study film making, Audio production, and Do a radio shift for whss 89.5 and Thats where I first started using the pink fluffy bunny rabbit of doom as my on-air name and then because that was too long here I cut it down to thepinkbunnyofdoom. How bout you?
It's plagurised!
po-etand knowit dandelions are not out of place on a 'lane' and dandelion fairies are the seeds we used to blow when we were younger with laughter .....
Do you remember laughter
dark angel
i know turn to rust refers to the moon turning rust coloured but why would it do that
had it gorged on its own cheese?
Anyway these were two very small points in the poem anyway
ta ta
Quite sweet. What did you do with yourself before u were on this site btw?