razorgrin
replying on selfish by <~>
9 Apr 2003, 12:04 PM
Dude, you're so much of a wiener all I can do is laugh.'U' are a sad little boy.
thankee.
Are you in the alton college poemranker crew AS WELL? god i didnt realise how many of us were on here.
lunar
on Uninformed, pseudo-philosophical thoughts about existence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
9 Apr 2003, 11:52 AM
its just because your you that you get so many votes and comments it seems. oh well if theres going to be a god of poemranking it may as well be someone who does seem to have intelligence of a sort
kinda crap, kinda good. whatever
yeah! i liked it.
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Well this really confused me, I don't know about everyone else but I believe that it needs to be clearer. I really liked the images though. I'll give it an 8, that should make up for the fact that nobody else has read it yet. Nice effort.
HAHAH yeah its bloody true they are such wankers! (replace lark angel with t'ien and red_neck with Desovsky -or however u spell it)how do u know how long it is though?
Interesting, certainly. Funny to a very limited extent. Um, check some of the rhyme. Probably a 7 for now.
what a masterpiece -10-
The only time i laughed was at clever devices comment
HE ACTUALLY DOES WEAR TRACKSUITS!!!
You are the man, Bill.
Excellent poem. For some reason I can't get the image of exploding heroes out of my head...
This is funny!
I really like this. I think that z is right in that there are a few too many questions. Other than that...I don't know. 8
Let the last two lines go, I don't think they really fit in with the rest. I know this sounds really shitty of me, but check the spelling a bit more, it just makes it easier for the reader.
Aside from that I love this but I would like to see more. Redraft it if you will, and I'll have another look. I think it's worth a seven. I'm in that kind of mood.