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<~> replying on Attention! - To the Wondering Soul by darkhelmet10 27 Mar 2003, 2:21 PM
hey bp217, i'd like some clarification on several of your comments, please. <No, it doesn?t depend on how you view it. No matter how you look at it, it is still evil, > what is ?it?, exactly? <even if you yourself think it to be right, if you think that killing people is acceptable then you are wrong. > so, it?s okay for us to do it, but not for them? <The problem with people today is that they think that everyone is right, no matter what.> which people would those be? <? the plan is this, you say something long enough eventually people will believe it. That?s how homosexuality is where it is today, because people didn?t want confrontations and eventually a new generation is born and all they hear about is how homosexuality is acceptable and anyone who thinks differently is a bigot.> um, sorry, but there is NOTHING wrong with homosexuality. it happens in nature all the time. you know, in god?s creations? so are you telling me that god is wrong then? <Soon as the next generation arises they will begin to doubt their own country, they'll say that we are the evil in this war,> hey, man, the next generation, and the last generation?we?re all here, and millions of us do think it?s wrong, and some of us even freeze our asses off at peace marches, and write letters, and phone congressmen, and boycott foreign oil,--you know, all the thing you can do to protest when you live in a democracy, where people have equal rights, even if they do stick their dicks into asses or mouths instead of into vaginas?(by the way, oral sex is illegal in Pennsylvania, naughty boy) <the iraqis were just minding their own buisness and then BAM here comes America with thier big guns their banners of freedom and wealth. I cant help thinking that this country is slowly dying and the masses don?t give a damn, they are content to live their lives and stay out of other peoples business, what happens when the law is determined by your beliefs, there is a word for that its called ANARCHY!!> you start out one way, it seems, then go the other. what is your point of view, friend?
Blindproject217 replying on Attention! - To the Wondering Soul by darkhelmet10 27 Mar 2003, 12:19 PM
No, it doesn?t depend on how you view it. No matter how you look at it, it is still evil, even if you yourself think it to be right, if you think that killing people is acceptable then you are wrong. The problem with people today is that they think that everyone is right, no matter what. Its because they themselves are doing what they know to be wrong and do not want anyone condemning them, so they say that absolutes are what you make them, you are your own God. Its an old scheme that has been going on for generations, the plan is this, you say something long enough eventually people will believe it. That?s how homosexuality is where it is today, because people didn?t want confrontations and eventually a new generation is born and all they hear about is how homosexuality is acceptable and anyone who thinks differently is a bigot. Soon as the next generation arises they will begin to doubt their own country, they'll say that we are the evil in this war, the iraqis were just minding their own buisness and then BAM here comes America with thier big guns their banners of freedom and wealth. I cant help thinking that this country is slowly dying and the masses don?t give a damn, they are content to live their lives and stay out of other peoples business, what happens when the law is determined by your beliefs, there is a word for that its called ANARCHY!!
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Hazy days by cleverdevice 27 Mar 2003, 11:48 AM
"remind" try pluralizing this. "I'll have left of my summer of love." I have left of my summer in love.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on you will feel by nentwined 27 Mar 2003, 11:45 AM
I have always been founder of the brave puncturer not the teasing mutilator.
poetandknowit replying on I Miss You by Birdman42s 27 Mar 2003, 10:09 AM
You are right; I am a coward. It is due to a genetic weight problem (I eat to many tater chips)! It started when I was a wee lad. In primary, I was 200 pounds and all the girls made fun of me. This cased my penis to shrink (I still have never seen it due to the weight, but the doctors tell me it is so). Now I live a life of seclusion. Thank God Al Gore invented the Internet, because now I have the ability to exact my verbal revenge on cockney speaking Brits.
Caducus on Gone by Katie2 27 Mar 2003, 9:33 AM
It just don't work as a poem, as a lyric with a chorus maybe.
darkhelmet10 on Gone by Katie2 27 Mar 2003, 8:35 AM
I've been there, good job on showing your feelings, but i agree it could use more imagery. Try to make the reader feel the pain, dont just describe it.
Caducus replying on I Miss You by Birdman42s 27 Mar 2003, 6:12 AM
God your such a coward thats twice i've found you slagging me off, do you realize that you look like a 2 faced twat moaning all the time. I prefer to encourage people there is a way of saying something, you are a selective critic who 99% of the time berates for sadistic kicks, the other 1% of you is all man. Birdman, ignore this sorry scrag end of humanity he's the bits of shit left over after god finished humanity.
god'swife on my heart sings a song by elizabethann 26 Mar 2003, 8:27 PM
Are you still a sap? I'm still a sap.
poetandknowit on I Miss You by Birdman42s 26 Mar 2003, 3:28 PM
No wonder Caducus writes weak poems. Look at the stuff he likes. Hey, birdman: I miss you, too.
god'swife on hard as a rock by <~> 26 Mar 2003, 2:08 PM
I'm so pig-headed, I don't understand the end. I particulary like the 5th stanza and the way you single her out from the rest of the women. Vilanelles are so restrictive, I doubt I could ever write even a bad one.
Luv2write on mirror by famenglory 26 Mar 2003, 2:05 PM
An excellent poem... it stuns my brain and all I can think of to really say how I feel about this one is WOW.
Nanshe on Seattle Seasons by Sawa 26 Mar 2003, 1:33 PM
I like this idea, but you do not convince me.
Nanshe on One More Mile by marvelis 26 Mar 2003, 1:33 PM
It seems as though you need to get religion.
<~> on riddle by ~incarnate~ 26 Mar 2003, 12:47 PM
one more hint, please
<~> on The grand embeddiment by horus8 26 Mar 2003, 12:37 PM
fig leaf pornography? what! why are they callled devil docs anyway? somehow i missed that.
poetandknowit on Mirror to Mirror by Roisin 26 Mar 2003, 11:31 AM
And as a bulb buried deep in wintry soil knows not to die, I really like these lines, which makes the last line pale a bit next to them. Can you find a way to stick with the image? Maybe. Maybe not?
poetandknowit replying on Awe, I'm like so shocked by horus8 26 Mar 2003, 11:27 AM
It is a sad day when you read a poem and have no clue what it is about. Oxywarmonger has nothing to do with the war in Iraq. It is not a Liberal Lament 2003. It may ramble (I am working on that), but to lump it as some sort of protest poem is to simply show the ineffectiveness of your ability to interpret the text properly. You have been editing way too much technical writing.
<~> on Awe, I'm like so shocked by horus8 26 Mar 2003, 10:52 AM
maybe not atomic any more. maybe darwinian. have a 9 on me.
<~> replying on Awe, I'm like so shocked by horus8 26 Mar 2003, 10:51 AM
i didn't carry a sign frass. my body, counted (or not), was my mute protest. i do not think i am up to it. if, in writing it, i could end it, i would.