lastobelus
on Three Pennies of Garbage by babyBOOMER
10 Mar 2003, 3:33 PM
Why is every word capitalized? Is this a kind of anti-cummings curmudgeonry?
Glad to see you can still get fired up. FWOT. the only way.
S-2 L-13 delete or blend ,maybe. I assumed there was a passing of time when the cuckoos flocked. Send your dad your guts.
Wow
What? I don't understand the second part of your comment. Please explain.
a little bit "mannered" in a way that I quite like. I have, actually, no fucking idea what "mannered" means, but i've been accused of it before and it seems to refer to a quality that I see here and like. 8.
Reads like a short story. Traditional. Nothing new. Some nice images.
Nice words here, good for you for letting the other know.
BTW, mine was an ORECK.......he stands behind everything personally.
this is familiar candy, i have a sweet tooth still but I'm working on kicking the habit.
henh? prosaic & folksy with occasional braying.
Damn cigarette advertisers got to petey too eh? Great job I enjoyed this one. -10-
i dunno, maybe you can sell this to Lords of Acid for a buck if you work the word pussy into it somewhere.
Yep. Or else the mouse freezes up. Creative. -10-
sorry, I couldn't even finish. kotz.
Nice ryhme scheme but the rest of its trite and dull.
No offence but -6- is all your gonna get out of me on this one. And 2 of those points are for the title.
I REMEMBER SEEING THE ROMANS IN THE CHILDRENS BIBLE LAUGHING AND I LOVED THE WAY YOU THREW IN THE BREAD AND WINE GREAT METAPHORS FOR SUFFERING AND JUDAS THE FAT BASTARD EATING SUPPER - REALLY GOOD WELL DONE 9
Actually, it's not going to be Tuesday anymore. The UN vote could now be Friday, and then as soon as the resolution is vetoed by three separate countries (France, Russia, China), Bush will begin raining fiery death all over the middle east.
I agree with you. I used to hate them, but now I write them all the time because I can knock them off in two minutes. Just for you, here's a bumper crop of anti-war haikus:I have never been
Bombed, but I don?t think I would
Send thanks to the pilot.
A liberation?
Kind regards for killing my
Brothers and sisters.
Hiroshima: then
Weapons of mass destruction
Were Truman?s baby
I stood in a crowd
Protesting by a castle -
Some of us were right.
Iraqi summer
Melts the UK issue boots ?
But souls can burn too.
Go, Clare ?Bomber? Short,
Resign from Tony?s polished
Cabinet of War
Fourteen forty one
ignored ? forget inspections,
Launch B52s.
This is dedicated to the great Marxist historian Eric Hobsbawm, who joined the communist after the invasion of Hungary in 1956, just as everybody else was resigning. Fact.
COOL