razorgrin
replying on Shouldn't have said anything(please critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642
10 Mar 2003, 6:48 AM
after you've kicked the tarrasque in the groin, sharks are nothing.
Aren't they cuddly?
"the oldest emotion of mankind is fear and the oldest fear is that of the unknown" -some guy from providence.
It's all about riding an Ebony Fly through canyons shooting at manticores with a Mighty Frost Longbow. My armour is glamoured to look like a leather bikini.
How about an orc in a 10x10 room guarding a pie?
I dig Rogues and clerics, meself. Perhaps with a cop-out ranger level for the 2-weapon fighting.
Dearest Grandma Speedy-nai, towards the end, regressed and thought that she was again that 18 year old winged wonder that so turned heads in the year of yester. Whenever they spoke to her she told all the boys to please stop flirting with her. We didn't say anything and let her enjoy her last few flights of happy befuddlement.
She didn't realize that she was in possession of dried up salty mucus, why would we hurt her by chopping her wings of extra comfort?
She is missed but I visit her and pooscat every day and place a wreath of skimmia japonica upon her mound whenever possible.
Ok. What Z said about the hat and line walkers were 2 of my dislikes. Your glitterati swerve to avoid, but they're overhead?
And S-1 old men/this old man/thisle man. You know me, less is more where I come from. lose one i think.
Other than that eees guut,yah.
Good day to you Sir, My name is Humphrey one of Mr Pigs close aides. He has just returned from Hospital and has asked me to request your kindness in his delay in replying. I had printed your comments for him to peruse and he was rather disconsolate. He asked me to pass this on to you.
Dear Dolyum, It is with regret that I have not had time to respond to your query regarding my Haiku 'The Cheetah', please for the record send me your question and once I can reply without the influence of drugs one will be delighted to hopefully answer your questions adequately.
Your Comrade in ink: Mr Pig xx
My eyes are like a vacum? Dirt Devil or Hoover?
See this is more your speed a little counter culture jazz baby, yeah diggit.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/thesalesman.mp3
I am 30 and a male model. Does it shock you that someone attractive can be educated and attractive? I erased my poem so I could post another one, but then I figured out that I could just create a different user id. If you want the poem, I can re-post it. You seemed really bothered by it. It's one of my most personal ones and that's why I posted it first.
It was great up until the last line.
You weren't suppose to delete the poem (fetus) Brandon. You were suppose to debate the opinion of felled fetus' everywhere and why they matter too. That is what a poet would have done, and also; he or she would not of erased it. Because then i would of told you a secret, and you would of went ohhhhhhhhhh, and we would have been friends. Forever. P.s. the activity above seems strange for a male model. It sound more like something a teacher would write. You lied to me professor, shame on you! I'm sure she was hot when she was younger though and still is. What makes you think i don't like old people?
Can't you see that I am busy writing and posting poetry? Last time I checked that's what this forum was created for, and not for beaver sounding retards to insult poets. Here is a number 1-900-shoo, I am sure that they will talk to you. Maybe for $2.99/min but at least they will be willing to listen to you.
"You sound like a beaver being
gang raped."
Now that is a sound that i'm sure you hear often. Nice metaphor much more believable then say an "evil curved breast".
Could i sound like Sophia loren getting gangraped by the golden girls next time? God i sure hope so. THankyou! Yor constant flattery is making me blush kind sir. An iq of 54? I don't recall my website disclosing that most sought after of misconceptions(i actually have no iq, truly, just a void) I really had no idea i was setting out to try to impress you, by what? saying you suck? Yes, that must of gave you the idea. Must I shoo> Can't i just whisper once more real sweet..........furke you?
"unicorns in the forest" but this is clearly a sign of a child hood molesting repressed into faiery tale symbolism. (i forget this one on my earlier list) i do like this poem though... it tastes like granola but has the texture of caviar? interesting.
This poem is clearly about seperatism, and how to fight against the evil with in one's sole
"toilets overflow"
"Jackson Pollock"
"roll a blunt"
"Josef Stalin"
"cauldron"
"shepherd's lithium"
"How dare you claim me mad!"
All quotes proving my point.
Thank you folks, i'm here all night too.
I am everyone that you're not, and yes I'm quite mad. Cheers!
Yes, Sir! Let me get right on that. Right after I smoke your old ladies clitoris.
How many fucking user names do you have? I am confused. Thank you, but no thanks. I would not be in your company even if you paid me. You are an obnoxious prick without manners. How the fuck do you just start attcking someone who just joins a forum to post his poems and to get feedback. What the fuck is wrong with you? Are you crazy? Seriously? Thanks for the 6. None of the poems under Shardik are even worthy of anything above a 4. Go finger bang your hot wife now. What a weirdo!
You should publish your work at Iwrotethreehundredpoems.com
they have an excellent roster, and
I hear Sophia Loren has a web site called A100yearoldwoptightvulvathatreadspoetry.
You're a great poet, and a 7.5! You are a composer, really? Did not like your music too much. Sorry. You sound like a beaver being gang raped. I bet that's how you got the name gang box, smart guy. With an IQ of 54, you really don't impress me. Go write some more impressive poetry now. shooo