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on Something for Lynn by Jeremi B. Handrinos
5 Mar 2003, 10:44 AM
shit. bleed tears all over me, and not a kleenex in situ. still negative? good. have a 9.
What do you mean by I'm the Asian dragon chaser shit?
just curious
lol God of Death a chigger...haha....so far from the truth. it's amusing to think about it
interesting mp3
Oh Shardik you do make me snigger Sir, you have got your hands full on this one but remember not to wear your baseball cap backwards, the constabulary will think one is a thug and put you in a cell with hairy itinerant Slovakian belles.
Curses ! where did one leave the bloody comerband, I am off to play canasta my dear boy - farewell now. -7
bravo, bravo. you should be proud of this. Can I use this in one of my classes? (I am a teacher)
I feel you have rightfully mastered this genre of writing. You have a gift for detailing moments and presenting them with aplomb. I jolly well wish you the best and this you have ordained this quite masterfully.
I bequeath thee a 9.
Bravo !
No, i liked the poem Mr. or Mrs. God of death. it's just that well i don't try and write about flying the space shuttle because i haven't granted i could imagine. Now, my point is that theory also applies to your mediocre and one sided grasp of heroin addiction in this poem. It's obvious to me that you've never shot up heroin, or have been close to someone who was a hard core h-addict on any level (and don't give me thaT I'M THE ASIAN DRAGon chaser shit because i see right through it, and this poem, and your face). That was all. oh i meant my mom not yours. i'm the wigger, chiggeri
Jolly Hockey sticks I really felt I was in the picture, you've managed to bring this to life admirably. I do hope that your greek good sir because I have collaborated a trilogy of greek tradgedy and would adore you for your comment.
Thank you in advance.
Pig / Mr
8
I say this is rather splendid but its a complete deviation from your other works, one feels however this more playful than a poem aimed to satiate.
Indulge yourself on a 7,
Jolly well done !
Please, and shut the fuck up don't fit well together Dur ah i mean holl- i mean betty, it's just shut the fuck up or GO FUCK YOURSELF, THE EVER GRAND, FACE FUCK YOURSELF WITHA CHEESE GRATER. TOE FUCK YOURSELF WITH a elephant foot, vagina shovel your fucking vulva, mow your moose knuckle with with a pair of north korean fags dressed up likematching scissors. I never said i was the best poet. i said poet. i practice dentistry as a hobby and fiswt fucking. here try this from my sole to yours.
http://www.gangbox.com/mp3/gangbox.mp3
Grimey, like a shuffle in the downtown sludge, open bardoors breathing the stink of liquor
and piss
and old men, their pockmarcked skin flaking hopeless desire.
"Dead is the drunkest that you can get,
but I haven't been that drunk yet."
-Martin Tielli
my guts feel wobbley
damn.
Vivid and touching in that sick ass way. Asian/ wigger/ nigger it's quality coming from any mind or stereotyped soul.
thanks for the feed back guy. I have a great deal to learn about rhyme form.
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU
nice
I missed a word out typing it in - I apologise for disrespecting the Japanese nation in this manner.
????????? I'm really confused....
1) I'm Asian. Not a wigger.
2) Give what you receive. I was honest and straighforward with you and told you merely what I thought.
3) Please be mature and don't say anything about my mother.
It's always sad to see straight edged hip hop wigger's trying to describe their mothers pain. You my friend are a master. A true knower of what it is to know what it is. i'm impressed, we all are very very impressed and moved by your words here 10!